Comments | ever_obsessed: fic: passage (10/10) (elle/claire)

ever_obsessed

fic: passage (10/10) (elle/claire)

Apr 25, 2009 01:10

Title: Passage (10/10)
Rating: NC-17 (language, disturbing imagery, graphic sex)
Pairing: Elle/Claire; side Adam/Elle, Adam/Claire
Timeline: Post-“ So”
Prompt: “love” at 10_themes
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing with them
Teaser: Ten stages between one thing and the next, between lust and love.

( she can still taste claire )

heroes: passage

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ever_obsessed May 13 2009, 09:22:57 UTC

Quite an image, :D

Thanks!

dauthik July 8 2009, 07:28:49 UTC

Gah. Gah.

Ok, I actually do have a problem with this fic, since I am really unhappy that Elle would let all this sexual abuse happen to her and then just take Claire back like that, it doesn't matter how many personal issues Elle had or how realistic it could be, it just hurts me inside. I figure there should at least be some large amount of distrust. But anyway.

Otherwise I was completely floored. Your writing is horribly vague and general at a lot of points, but somehow it all WORKS - it doesn't quite make sense, but it makes enough sense so that you want to make the sense out of it and keep reading and wanting more. Pretty much.

Seems to have been a few months since this was written. A sequel you say? Off to look for it!

ever_obsessed July 9 2009, 02:28:46 UTC

I figure there should at least be some large amount of distrust.
You probably won't believe me but this? Makes me happy.

I can't go any deeper into why this comment makes me so happy because I would end up ruining a lot of the character arc I'm setting up through the series in regards to the both of them but, yes, it pleases me greatly. Greatly. Almost to an embarrassing amount.

Ahem, thanks, :-)