fic: passage (10/10) (elle/claire)

[ever_obsessed]

Title: Passage (10/10)
Rating: NC-17 (language, disturbing imagery, graphic sex)
Pairing: Elle/Claire; side Adam/Elle, Adam/Claire
Timeline: Post-“ So”
Prompt: “love” at 10_themes
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing with them
Teaser: Ten stages between one thing and the next, between lust and love.

Comments

[tashamiller2k]

Wonderful timing for the final part, I had just finished up reading the other 9 parts.
I have absolutely been adoring this, it's so wonderfully written, my heart really goes out to Elle with the way you have written her. Bravo.

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks so much.

I wanted to show how Elle could evolve from the woman we were first introduced to in S2 without falling into the ridiculously of how they wrote her in S3 which was... painful to watch as an Elle fan, :|

So I'm glad that it's worked, <3

[theagonyofblank]

I love, love, love this fic.

I'm glad it ended on a happier note, though there are so many questions in my head now - about the Company, about why Noah saved her... Not-mad Noah was a little creepy, but hey - better than kicking her out, at least for now, haha. I was also a little surprised by how quickly Claire changed - she'd been so annoyed with Elle before, but after Elle's outburst, it seemed like everything had changed and Claire wasn't annoyed with her anymore. (I know this was the previous chapter, but I didn't review it as I read it right before this one.) I wonder if there's a deeper meaning behind this? Everyone's reactions were just so unexpected, but then again - that's realistically... human.

I'll have to reread the entire series when I get the chance, but I really enjoyed this, and I'm looking forward to the sequel!

[ever_obsessed]

You asked everything I wanted you to ask, so \o/

And this: Everyone's reactions were just so unexpected, but then again - that's realistically... human makes me unbearably happy to get this in a review, with the whole study I'm setting up and how it relates to everything else.

So yay, <3

[freakykaethe]

Yay.. I don't have much to say actually, except that I can't wait for your sequel, and that I loved to read this :D
Thanks for sharing your talent ;)

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks!

[noisesmear]

Awww, it's really sweet to see Elle finally get some love & care.
Claire seems happier too, & like she's really starting to get past her issues from earlier on.
I love your fic! :D

I'm really looking forward to the sequel! Still many questions I'm wondering about, like:
- What Claire is working on/emailing that is nothing she wants Elle to know. / The image Elle saw & wondered about.
- Why Claire needs Adam/what's going on between the two of them.
- What Bob was going on about in the flashback.
- What Noah has been up to, (I guess something one always seems to wonder in regards to Noah) ;-)
- Why he saved Elle,
etc.

[ever_obsessed]

Your questions make me happy, since I want them to be asked.

Sequel coming soon, and everyone should enjoy, :-)

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks so much, this kind of response means a lot to me, since I know the ending wasn't what a lot of people were completely expecting - but everything had to settle here in this form in order for things to finally go the way they go in the sequel, and this character development had to be focused on so that we could keep building onto it, :-)

So thanks so much, this is... a review that means a lot to me, <3