Welcome Home (1/??)

[even_gods_dream]

Title: Welcome Home
Rating: Erm.. T? for now.
Summary: Benji Madden is heading out to the countryside with his father to see where his late mother grew up. Joel Combs has lived in the very same village all of his life and has been waiting for something to spice up boring village life. But what underlying secrets will be unturned by snooping villagers

Comments

[waiting4benji]

:-D

I like this alot! Great beginning! And I love the mystery in it too. Have some ideas of what the secret may be ;-)
Really excited to read more, please continue it!

[even_gods_dream]

Eep thanks :]
You made that whole 'nervous about posting new story' feeling go away. :]
There's more on it's way! :D

[waiting4benji]

Yay, glad you feel better about it and will update soon.
I promise to come back and read more!
(I love the pink patch Benji too ;-)

[yay_for_gays]

“Hey, I wasn’t terrorising the dog or anything,” Hehehe!

I Want More Please :D

[even_gods_dream]

hehe thanks!
More on it's way :]

[buzzify]

Great start so far. I love the plot and the potential of the story overall. *I always loved the pink patch of hair

[even_gods_dream]

Thanks :D
And that was helpful so cheers :] I always get confused with punctuation in dialogue and such so thanks for clearing that up. :D

[greenpants59]

This seems like an interesting idea and I totally think you should continue!!!
^_~
Cheers!

[even_gods_dream]

Thank yoooooooou [:

[omgxitsxshiloh]

i'm a sucker for the pink patch of hair. :X