[Oneshot] Electric Twist

Feb 06, 2011 04:22

Title: Electric Twist
Pairing(s): Ohmiya
Rating: R
Disclaimer: do not own these boys
Word count: 3000
Summary: Sometimes Nino feels like he doesn't really know Ohno at all.

Nino tried to cover up how flustered he was by readjusting his shirt and making sure his pants were zipped up )

ohmiya, fic, arashi

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jamasunda February 6 2011, 10:04:56 UTC
Ngh. ♥ I'm lame at commenting. >_>

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eva_lee February 7 2011, 19:48:02 UTC
Thanks for reading! Even incoherent comments are amazing

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barefootprint February 6 2011, 10:07:27 UTC
i'd definitely want that aggressive ohno. his change of demeanor and attitude was completely different from what nino knows and that threw him off a bit. but at least it was still the same ohno at the end.

i love their dance floor scenes! it was sexy ;D

enjoyed reading! thanks for sharing :)

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eva_lee February 7 2011, 19:49:33 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Writing aggressive Ohno was fun, and sort of challenging, but of course he couldn't stay that way for long.

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floweranza February 6 2011, 11:06:30 UTC
♥.♥

I really liked this! Very emotional, in the best way possible. (/sucks at commenting lol) Thanks for sharing!
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eva_lee February 7 2011, 19:50:47 UTC
I hope this doesn't sound weird, but I am a big fan of your writing! When I saw your comment here I couldn't believe it. Thank you for reading, this makes me really happy

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floweranza February 10 2011, 09:18:29 UTC
*A* Oh, thank you! In return, thank you for remembering me; I don't write often nowadays! (Not for lack of trying orzzzz.)

Keep on writing, bb! :)
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eva_lee February 10 2011, 18:09:18 UTC
You've written some of my favourite stories! I hope that you keep trying!

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mongo_o_o February 6 2011, 13:37:34 UTC
your ohno is so sexy *_*
i really liked this!

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eva_lee February 7 2011, 19:52:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thank for for taking the time to read it! I can't resist sexy Ohno

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xxx_francesca February 6 2011, 13:50:07 UTC
this was awesome~! ohno's fierce behaviour & the dance floor moments omgshhh i want him rn lol!
Good job ! XDb

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eva_lee February 7 2011, 19:53:19 UTC
Thank you!! I was worried Ohno would seem to out of sorts, but I'm glad you enjoyed him <3

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