Empty Spaces Chapter Ten -Story complete

[etoile_etiolee]

A/N: This story isn't done, but this part has come to its conclusion in this chapter. Please read my note at the end of the chapter about the sequel coming up. Thanks everybody for reading this little fic of mine. Masterpost will be on my LJ tomorrow.

Comments

[katsheswims]

This was a great story. I thought you kept it very realistic--I just hope that in the sequel Eric gets (or has gotten) what he deserves and doesn't get away with it (or just get a slap on the wrist as they say) as often happens in real life...

I can't wait to read the sequel.

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you very much, and I can already promise you that Eric's sentence will be agravated by some facts you still don't know about, giving Jensen some space and time to breath and feel safe :)
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[debauchedsock]

I loved it! I think I already told you this, but I really needed some hurt!Jensen and this, regular posting schedule or no, definitely made so very many of my days, so thank you so much for that. I actually really liked the ending, and your note at the end made me tear up a little, because there really isn't a big finish to a lot of things in life, and this stayed true to that so well, but at the same time I know that Jensen really grew, and Jared did too. I just loved this so much.

I usually don't do this, but I'm mentioning it just out of curiosity, really. Did you mean to say a crowd of "peasants" gathered?

[etoile_etiolee]

Wow, thank you so much. This comment really touched me because I was a little scared of disapointing you guys.

And thanks for pointing out the mistake: I didn't meant peasants at all, but bystanders. Being a french speaking person, I sometimes still do something like litteral translation where my brain picks up a word that kind of sounds the same in english -in this case, the french word for "bystanders" is "passants" so my brain suggested peasants without me realising it :D

I am always glad when people point out my mistakes because my english is far from perfect, and it is done so politely I would be an idiot to take it the wrong way.

I made the correction btw.

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[tebtosca]

I'm so happy that Jensen got to release some of that pent up emotion and that he's going to hold Eric accountable. Beautiful story and can't wait for the sequel! <3

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you so much. I had this idea that Jensen had to stand for himself -in a realistic way, considering the state he's in- and since his self-esteem is only starting to rebuilt, I thought that Eric punching Jared would be the element that would trigger this.
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[anonymous]

Can't wait for the sequel hope we'll get to read it before LJ cracks down on all the slash fics.

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you!
(what? LJ wants to crack down slash fics? There won't be a lot of people left on LJ then...)

[sleepypercy]

I almost didn't want to read this because I was so sad for it to end (however temporary). But it was beautiful and heart-wrenching and such a lovely ending for this story arc. Thanks for writing this amazing story <3

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me, keeps me motivated.
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