Empty Spaces Chapter Nine

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Comments

[firesign10]

Oh man, Jensen needs to heal so badly, and Jared - it's hard to even decide what Jared needs. And over both of them is the spectre of Eric...

[etoile_etiolee]

Yes, a lot of things are in the way of our boys. But hey, spoiler: they'll get through this ;-)
Thank you for commenting.
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[nong_pradu]

Another great chapter! I'm so worried about what's going to happen when they get back to Augusta... Eric seems like he's getting pretty desperate. I'm afraid he's going to hurt the boys!!

[etoile_etiolee]

Next chapter is going to come pretty soon so you won't have to worry about the boys for too many days. Thank you for commenting (and your comment remind me that I still haven't answered your pm, which I'm gonna do later today I swear! :)

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[ferrous_wheeler]

So glad that Jensen is going to be pressing charges, but he's still so damaged that he needs far more than a week to heal before facing Eric.
Great chapter!

[etoile_etiolee]

Jensen's healing is only starting, you're right. But he'll still need to press charge if he doesn't want to be scared all the time. Life won't be easy for him in his immediate futur.
Thanks for commenting!
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[ayane42]

another wonderful chapter!! all the emotional turmoil for both boys and the fear of Eric's anger and desparation.

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[obsidianromance]

Lovely new chapter. I wish they could just stay at the cabin.

Also, I have to say, you have done a lovely job of make Jensen seem so much younger than Jared. I don't really mean age wise, I mean experience wise. Jensen's young adult and adult life was so sheltered since he was restricted from doing so much while living under Eric's rule. It is like he is learning how to be an adult who can make his own choices. It is sad and painful but realistic.

Poor Jared...he is trying to do his best for Jensen but he is only human. Of course he couldn't help finding some release after he was making out with Jensen (and other things).

Thanks for sharing!

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you so much for saying all those nice things to me. I really tried to make Jensen young and innocent in a way because at this point of his life, he never had the chance to grow as a human being and it's so nice of you to notice it.
I do feel for Jared in this chapter because yeah, it's really hard for him to keep the straight moral line he drew. He loves Jensen so much.

Wouldn't it be nice if they could stay at the cabin forever? Sadly, for the sake of realism...

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