Heroes fic: Glittering Blackness

[ethersol]

Title: Glittering Blackness
Pairing: Claire/Gretchen
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Claire had never dated another girl before, and to be honest, hadn't given it too much thought--until Gretchen had kissed her that night." Heroes Fic. 2326 words. Claire/Gretchen fanfic challenge.

Comments

[gixan]

First, it sounded like you raided my movie collection. =] 2ndly, I really enjoyed reading this fic - very smooth paced and very good job with showing the girls nervousness as two different people and together as well.

*bows and fades off into darkness* - Gixan

[ethersol]

hahah glad to hear you appreciate some good horror/thriller movies :)

and thank you for your kind words. i was pretty nervous about posting this, as i never post fic :/ but the comm needs some fic, so here we are!

[gixan]

Your very welcome and you shouldn't be nervous. =] You have the talent to write, its not easy I know. So....how about them in the morning? Waking up.....yano? In each others arms.

*chuckles under my hood and gives you the thumbs up* - Gixan

[dragynflies]

This was fantastic!! Loved all the cute little details that made it seem real -- adorable!!

[ethersol]

ooh thank you so much, i'm glad it was okay ^^

[haithurleah]

I love that you didn't try to make their first time really alone together seem perfect. Obviously it was going to be a little awkward, and you incorporated that so well into the story; it was the perfect balance of adorable and awkward.

[ethersol]

Thank you for reading, I appreciate your input :)

[mrjamesileee]

awesome work. very believable, you have their character voices down. loved the detail and how easy it was to picture.

[ethersol]

aww thank you so much. i'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

[alex_davis11]

Amazing. It was so easy to picture them in that scenario. I love your writting, very believable.

[ethersol]

Thank you :D *hugs*