Fic: Mourning

[etherealflaim]

Title:Mourning Genre:Gen, AU (slight) Rating:PG-13 (language) Fandom:Prison Break Characters:Michael, Lincoln Summary:Some questions are best left unanswered. Author's Notes:Written for the February Challenge at foxriver_fic. I think this is my 7th contribution? I don't know, I'm not counting. I'm just doing this because it's doing a great job of

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

I don't see any cheating-- Aldo IS technically there. The way I prefer him, actually.

But as much as he loved him, and as smart as Lincoln knew him to be, he also knew that the answer to that question was no.
I couldn't agree more.

You're getting a lot out of these challenges! I've written 2, and have hopes of another 1 or 2 maybe. Depending. Because the month's about to run out. :0

[etherealflaim]

Thanks for reading!! I honestly was nervous when I saw that you'd reviewed my fic (as I am every time I see your reviews come in), because it feels almost like having a celebrity critiquing your performance. I know you're busy, so it feels like a great honor to have you read something that I wrote and actually comment on it =)

the answer to that question was no.
I couldn't agree more.
It is very telling how the brothers know the other one more than they know themselves in all too many ways. There are times where I think that slash (which this is not) sells the characters' love far short of the mark. (Another reason I love reading what you write, because you always manage to respectfully keep the obvious depth of their bond even when they're doing something as shallow as rough car sex.)

You're getting a lot out of these challenges!Haha, is that a nice way of saying that I'm getting carried away? ;) I was trying to keep this fic short and still focus on the love between the characters... that was the goal of me writing this one

[happywriter06]

"Mikey. He chose this life before you or I could choose what to eat for breakfast. He chose this life for me, and in turn for you."
So true! This is really nice. Feels very in character.

[etherealflaim]

Thanks for the kind words! I fought a lot over Lincoln's voice in this, but in the end I decided on what you see there now. I find it a lot harder to write Lincoln's voice sometimes because I know he feels more than he can verbalize. At leat, MY Lincoln does. >=)

Thanks for reading =)
~EF

[happywriter06]

I think I lot of people have the same issue with Linc.

michael/linc fic

[anonymous]

thanks so much, your writing is so beautiful. please do write more on michael en Linc, it touches me deep!

Re: michael/linc fic

[etherealflaim]

Will do! Thanks for reading!