Fic: Mourning

[etherealflaim]

Title:Mourning Genre:Gen, AU (slight) Rating:PG-13 (language) Fandom:Prison Break Characters:Michael, Lincoln Summary:Some questions are best left unanswered. Author's Notes:Written for the February Challenge at foxriver_fic. I think this is my 7th contribution? I don't know, I'm not counting. I'm just doing this because it's doing a great job of

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[etherealflaim]

Thanks for reading!! I honestly was nervous when I saw that you'd reviewed my fic (as I am every time I see your reviews come in), because it feels almost like having a celebrity critiquing your performance. I know you're busy, so it feels like a great honor to have you read something that I wrote and actually comment on it =)

the answer to that question was no.
I couldn't agree more.
It is very telling how the brothers know the other one more than they know themselves in all too many ways. There are times where I think that slash (which this is not) sells the characters' love far short of the mark. (Another reason I love reading what you write, because you always manage to respectfully keep the obvious depth of their bond even when they're doing something as shallow as rough car sex.)

You're getting a lot out of these challenges!
Haha, is that a nice way of saying that I'm getting carried away? ;) I was trying to keep this fic short and still focus on the love between the characters... that was the goal of me writing this one, as I feel like I've shortchanged that a few times in my slashy pieces. I don't know if I'll have time to do any more before the month runs out, but I think that I'll be able to find something about next month's challenge to stretch me. Or, I could actually go and try to learn how to develop plot and finish out my multi-part pieces... ^_^

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
~EF