[Katekyou Hitman Reborn!]: "The Jungle" (continuation of 'The Raven', Hibari/Chrome OTP?)

[kill_me_faster]

Well, the subsequent continuation of 'The Raven', which I posted yesterday. I actually had this part finished at the time that I posted Raven, but I decided to post them on separate days to save my f-list the spam.

ENJOY YOUR EPICALLY LONG REQUEST FIC, RUNE, YOU HO. @.@

Title: The Jungle
Author: Upton Sinclair Lorelei DiAngelo
Rating: NC-17.

Comments

[rukawagf]

LOL i love your intros XD XD

For three days, he'd been able to think of little else but the taste of her blood.
akjshdfaksjdhflakjsdhfalkjshfdalkj hj faksjhdfkasjdhfaksj HOT! *dies*

Hibari was licking the blood from the wound on her cheek, slowly, with his tongue.
that's creepy o.o

"Then fight," he told her, scratching cuts in her bare shoulder with his fingernails, harsh red lines; "fight me, for your life."
I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally like your Hibari... *.*
so you did keep him somewhat gentle... in his own ways :P

"You have until the time the match is over to earn that name which you claim you're going to keep. If you can't do that, then, I'm going to kill you."
interesting. so how does chrome suppose to earn that name eh? hmmm

What was she expected to do to earn it? Fly?
ROFL!!! yeah no kidding eh?

[rukawagf]

"At this rate, you're going to die."

(This was 'properly', then?)

KSJFLKAKAJSDLJ ROFL!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHA POOR CHROME XD

Hibari speaking in Italian and mukuro laughing is pure win XD XD XD XD

"Your jacket," she asked meekly, politely, "may I...unbutton your jacket?"
WTF? XD XD XD

it's interesting how you and hope both have this kink porn thing going on. it's almost never a straight missionary smut fic XD XD semi-bondage lol

whoa... chrome actually wants this now??? o.o

"Down," ... "I'm going to bite you to death."
hibari's being ridiculous now XD XD

An airplane? - how strange; she'd thought that she was Nightingale.
lines like this makes me realize, i got a looooooooong way to go as a writer lol

(Which, why was he the one that was bleeding? She was the one who had been hurt, after all!)
*.* oh man, love this line~~~<3

" - sorry, because I didn't do what you asked. Because I was so startled, for a second, you see, that I forgot to play dead."now THAT is awesome how she replied to Hibari's question. Oh hibari

[rukawagf]

"I'll give you one last chance," he said to her hoarsely, almost angrily; "one last chance, to fight me, for your life."
Cough. Choke. Right hibari, you sure ??? XD i think you want her more than you are willing to admit.

And because Mukuro blinks for too long, his Chrome disappears. In her place is Nightingale.
interesting :D

she left the skylark asleep in his cage.
Oh she's in trouble now XD XD

[kurafufu]

asd;lgkhasdg [dead]

your writing is amazing