[Katekyou Hitman Reborn!]: "The Jungle" (continuation of 'The Raven', Hibari/Chrome OTP?)

[kill_me_faster]

Well, the subsequent continuation of 'The Raven', which I posted yesterday. I actually had this part finished at the time that I posted Raven, but I decided to post them on separate days to save my f-list the spam.

ENJOY YOUR EPICALLY LONG REQUEST FIC, RUNE, YOU HO. @.@

Title: The Jungle
Author: Upton Sinclair Lorelei DiAngelo
Rating: NC-17.

Comments

[rukawagf]

"At this rate, you're going to die."

(This was 'properly', then?)

KSJFLKAKAJSDLJ ROFL!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHA POOR CHROME XD

Hibari speaking in Italian and mukuro laughing is pure win XD XD XD XD

"Your jacket," she asked meekly, politely, "may I...unbutton your jacket?"
WTF? XD XD XD

it's interesting how you and hope both have this kink porn thing going on. it's almost never a straight missionary smut fic XD XD semi-bondage lol

whoa... chrome actually wants this now??? o.o

"Down," ... "I'm going to bite you to death."
hibari's being ridiculous now XD XD

An airplane? - how strange; she'd thought that she was Nightingale.
lines like this makes me realize, i got a looooooooong way to go as a writer lol

(Which, why was he the one that was bleeding? She was the one who had been hurt, after all!)
*.* oh man, love this line~~~<3

" - sorry, because I didn't do what you asked. Because I was so startled, for a second, you see, that I forgot to play dead."
now THAT is awesome how she replied to Hibari's question. Oh hibari -.-;;; *facepalm*

He stared at her, for a very long time.
yeah.

his fingers were long enough to break her hymen? dang.... chrome is tiny....
well she is 13.

supposed to be a threat, but instead merely came out as a rough, low sigh.
oh the things i like about your fics~~~<3

[rukawagf]

"I'll give you one last chance," he said to her hoarsely, almost angrily; "one last chance, to fight me, for your life."
Cough. Choke. Right hibari, you sure ??? XD i think you want her more than you are willing to admit.

And because Mukuro blinks for too long, his Chrome disappears. In her place is Nightingale.
interesting :D

she left the skylark asleep in his cage.
Oh she's in trouble now XD XD