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[tvd stefan/elena] This is Life (this is you carved into my skin) (1/1)

Oct 01, 2012 08:01

This is Life (this is you carved into my skin)
By: White Rain
Disclaimer: I do not own The Vampire Diaries.
Genre: Slice of life around questionable consent. My OTP, Internets.
Character/Pairing: Elena/Stefan; Damon, Jeremy, Tyler, Caroline (some Tyler/Caroline)
Word Count: 1749
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Contains: ( cut for spoilers for fic )

fandom: the vampire diaries, ship: stefan/elena

Comments 6

softly_me October 3 2012, 02:45:52 UTC

OKAY, I HAVE NOT COMMENTED ON THIS YET BECAUSE I HAD TO RESPOND TO THOSE COMMENTS YOU LEFT ON MY LEXI POST.

BUT I READ IT AND LOVED AND IT AND WILL RETURNED.

(I swear, I just cannot keep up with how much you write fic and otherwise. This is all your fault.)

a_white_rain October 3 2012, 12:36:49 UTC

No it's your fault. You keep up with the prompts that eat my brain. AND YOU MADE STEFAN A PERMANENT PART OF MY HEADSPACE, Okay, the massive season three rewatch/series rewatch made me understand him better (season three is so much less frustrating when not watched week by week) BUT HALF OF IT IS YOUR FAULT.

bellonablack October 4 2012, 00:31:27 UTC

Oh this is brilliant! :) I loved all the cute, so intimate moments, and THEN YOU FINISH WITH A DESCRIPTION OF SERIAL KILLING. YOU. <3 That's so great, so fundamentally awesome, and it's complicated, especially when he closes his eyes. It's great with your beginning of her pushing him. YES. <3

LOVE THIS.

a_white_rain October 5 2012, 12:50:04 UTC

S/E may become my favoritest ship ever because I can do serial killer smut and double dates. Thanks for reading!

softly_me October 6 2012, 11:59:58 UTC

Blegh, I am here to give you my FEELINGS. Because, sorry, but I've started posting that S/E meta project and so I'm kind of all out of thoughts. So this is goingto be high-volume emotions comment because you have killed me dead with this one. I mean it, the way you run the contrast between their silly teenager love nonsense and their brutal bloodthirsty closet sex... the way you do the contrast and still make it feel natural. Stunning. Please write them forever, kthnx.

They landed on the ground of his room with her on top. He looked at her like he didn't know what he was seeing. Good.

ASL;FG;JKDAGJ ALREADY I CAN'T. HE'S SEEING SOMEONE NEW AND THAT'S WHAT SHE WANTS. THE GOOD THING ABOUT BEING A VAMPIRE IS THAT YOU CAN BE ANYONE. DECEASED.

"Of course we do," Elena said and when Stefan tried to pull away from her, she grabbed his arm. He held his place.

as;l;dfagghkkgkhggd. 'You have me', he told her once at another high school dance. He doesn't get to take that promise back. He's hers now.

"It's not like that," ( ... )

a_white_rain October 6 2012, 15:59:03 UTC

I mean it, the way you run the contrast between their silly teenager love nonsense and their brutal bloodthirsty closet sex... the way you do the contrast and still make it feel natural. Stunning. Please write them forever, kthnx.
Haha I'm glad you liked it. I was worried it came across unfinished and unpolished. And, of course, that was sort of the point. Nothing is resolved. It's not supposed to. But, still, there's not being finished in what I want to say and lazy writing. So, I worry.

. THE GOOD THING ABOUT BEING A VAMPIRE IS THAT YOU CAN BE ANYONE. DECEASED.
AND HE WAS THE ONE WHO TOLD HER THAT.

as;l;dfagghkkgkhggd. 'You have me', he told her once at another high school dance. He doesn't get to take that promise back. He's hers now.Like, I was thinking about making it longer and having Damon's frustration that he lost them both and Jeremy's being fed up with Elena's life choices but, man, i really can't do another 30k fic. AT LEAST NOT UNTIL I FINISH THE ONE I'M DOING. But, yes, whatever canon does, I'm totally writing a lot ( ... )