[Nabari no Ou] What Dark Hands

[scratchmist]

Title: What Dark Hands
Rating: T for gore and violence. (Haven't written those in a while. 8D)
Character/Pairing: Yoite, Yukimi, Kazuho, Miharu, Hattori
Word Count: 2814
Credit: Title, subtitles, and inspiration from the beautiful poem Miniature Bridges, Your Mouth by Marty McConnell, which I'm pretty sure I found on 31_daysWarnings: Major spoilers up to

Comments

[snarkwithasmile]

You've got an excellent Yoite voice here. I liked seeing his perspective on the scenes with Yukimi, and the interesting idea that even from the beginning, his wish to disappear was becoming overshadowed by his wish to know Miharu. Thanks for this.

[scratchmist]

You're welcome! I'm glad I was able to get Yoite's voice all right (apparently the trick was to use a lot of parenthesis and run-on-sentences. hahaha), and I enjoyed writing his interactions with Yukimi. Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment. It is greatly appreciated. =)