A Small Complaint

Sep 21, 2011 07:15

Fandom: The Legend of Sun Knight
Summary: Sun complains; the result isn't what he expected, and definitely isn't what he wanted!
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Contains light Sun/Judgement.
Uses some manhua information.
Genre: General/Humour
Word count: 591
Status: Complete

A Small Complaint )

fanfic: a small complaint, character: sun, character: judgement, fandom: the legend of sun knight

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lucathia_rykatu September 21 2011, 08:01:21 UTC
Hehe, I love how Judgment and Sun just walk into each other's rooms... XD;

Hm, Adair?

his wings flapping in time with his agitation.
Eeeeeeeee! That sounds so cute. XD;

"I complained -just a little!- about how annoying my attire was and - and apparently the God of Light actually heard me and decided to-!"
Pfffft! Aw, poor Sun!

This definitely sounds heavier than whatever he was wearing before. =P

Sun's wings shivered at the touch.
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee. They're sensitive? :3

"What did you do?" Sun asked curiously as he brought his wing around to inspect it.
I wish I could see this drawn. <3

Quite a lot of his feathers were askew, sticking out at haphazard angles.
Messy wings!!! XD;

"You woke up with wings, didn't you?"
Haha, like waking up with bed hair...

"You do realise that if this can't be reversed, people will expect your wings to be perfect?"
Pfffft! OMG. Of course. The Sun Knight has to be perfect!

and he had to keep a brush on him when he was going about, when it eventually became tangled
XDDDD

"I'll come at first ( ... )

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darkicedragon September 21 2011, 10:06:35 UTC
Oh, but people wouldn't want to disturb Sun if he was talking with/praying to the God of Light, would they? And walking into Judgement's room without announcing themselves? People would probably think they'd get judged if they did that. XD;;;;

"Hm, Adair?"
XD He was getting worried again, when Sun didn't show up for breakfast.

"This definitely sounds heavier than whatever he was wearing before. =P"
Just a bit. XDDD At least he's always going to - wait, no, he's going to have to hunch over to compensate for the weight! And then straighten up whenever someone sees him and then nearly topple over in the process! XDDDDD

"Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee. They're sensitive? :3"
Yeeeeeep. :D

"I wish I could see this drawn. <3"
Haha, I would draw it if I could draw human faces. *fail*

"Haha, like waking up with bed hair..."
Worse than bed hair! At least you 'just' have to brush your hair, but wings and crooked feathers? omg. A lot more work! XD ( ... )

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lucathia_rykatu September 21 2011, 23:02:51 UTC
I was going "Hm Adair" and then I realized later that Adair must've been worried over Sun. XD;

Ahhh, can't have Sun hunched over! Think what that'd do to his posture! A Sun Knight with a hunched back?

Brushing wings every day... oh man! Birds have it easier. At least they can use their beaks, and they're very flexible. Sun won't be able to reach his back. =P

Sun has a spell to lighten himself, doesn't he? Or am I just mixing up canon and Bittersweet Sweetness? Or the fact that Sun can recover from tripping in midair? XD
I don't think I've written him lightening himself. XDDD;; But I think he should be able to do it with wind magic!

(Aaaand pfft, let's just go with, the wings are so magical that clothes fit around them without needing to be adjusted. XDDDD)
Hahaha! Now, those are the best kind of wings. ;) I'm sure Roland's wings work like that too, hahaha. XD; And he seems to be able to put them away.

Bwahahaha! People would think that, wouldn't they? *imagines Sun flying over the city ( ... )

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darkicedragon September 22 2011, 05:41:11 UTC
"Ahhh, can't have Sun hunched over! Think what that'd do to his posture! A Sun Knight with a hunched back?"
Bwahahaha! XDD
'The presence of the God of Light is heavy on him!'
'It's the wings!'

"Sun won't be able to reach his back. =P"
Pffffffft. If he tried, he'd just get a faceful of wings. XDDD
'I am not an owl!! How do I-??'

"But I think he should be able to do it with wind magic!"
That'll do. XDD He can push himself up with wind magic - but then his feathers will be all ruffled after. XDDDDD

"I'm sure Roland's wings work like that too, hahaha. XD;"
HA! Roland isn't wearing clothes for the wings to go around to begin with! :P

"And he seems to be able to put them away."
LAKSJFLSD I hadn't realised that the first time we saw his tattoo! I was just, 'eeeeeeee, he has tattoos!' and then when I was writing him no No True Pair, I realised he was missing something...

"*everyone stares in awe and picks up feathers he drops*"
Nooooo! *sob!* Stop stealing them - I can sell them so lots of gold ducats! They're for my retirement!

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laurose8 September 21 2011, 19:23:01 UTC
Thanks for a lovely ficlet.

I'm sure he'll be a very good flier. Eventually.

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darkicedragon September 22 2011, 05:42:36 UTC
Hee! Thank you!

Yeeees. Very eventually. Give him enough practice though, and he'll be able to do it perfectly. XD

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