A Small Complaint

Sep 21, 2011 07:15

Fandom: The Legend of Sun Knight
Summary: Sun complains; the result isn't what he expected, and definitely isn't what he wanted!
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Contains light Sun/Judgement.
Uses some manhua information.
Genre: General/Humour
Word count: 591
Status: Complete

A Small Complaint )

fanfic: a small complaint, character: sun, character: judgement, fandom: the legend of sun knight

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darkicedragon September 21 2011, 10:06:35 UTC
Oh, but people wouldn't want to disturb Sun if he was talking with/praying to the God of Light, would they? And walking into Judgement's room without announcing themselves? People would probably think they'd get judged if they did that. XD;;;;

"Hm, Adair?"
XD He was getting worried again, when Sun didn't show up for breakfast.

"This definitely sounds heavier than whatever he was wearing before. =P"
Just a bit. XDDD At least he's always going to - wait, no, he's going to have to hunch over to compensate for the weight! And then straighten up whenever someone sees him and then nearly topple over in the process! XDDDDD

"Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee. They're sensitive? :3"
Yeeeeeep. :D

"I wish I could see this drawn. <3"
Haha, I would draw it if I could draw human faces. *fail*

"Haha, like waking up with bed hair..."
Worse than bed hair! At least you 'just' have to brush your hair, but wings and crooked feathers? omg. A lot more work! XD

"Pfffft! OMG. Of course. The Sun Knight has to be perfect!"
In every single way! XD

"I hope Sun's able to fly with these."
Sun has a spell to lighten himself, doesn't he? Or am I just mixing up canon and Bittersweet Sweetness? Or the fact that Sun can recover from tripping in midair? XD

He should be too heavy, but if the wings were created by magic, who cares. (Aaaand pfft, let's just go with, the wings are so magical that clothes fit around them without needing to be adjusted. XDDDD)

" People will think he's an angel. Or the God of Light himself. =P"
Bwahahaha! People would think that, wouldn't they?

"This was really cute (haha, though inconvenient for Sun) but I am so adoring how Judgment immediately thinks of helping Sun with them. :D"
Sun will be insufferable otherwise. *cough*

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lucathia_rykatu September 21 2011, 23:02:51 UTC
I was going "Hm Adair" and then I realized later that Adair must've been worried over Sun. XD;

Ahhh, can't have Sun hunched over! Think what that'd do to his posture! A Sun Knight with a hunched back?

Brushing wings every day... oh man! Birds have it easier. At least they can use their beaks, and they're very flexible. Sun won't be able to reach his back. =P

Sun has a spell to lighten himself, doesn't he? Or am I just mixing up canon and Bittersweet Sweetness? Or the fact that Sun can recover from tripping in midair? XD
I don't think I've written him lightening himself. XDDD;; But I think he should be able to do it with wind magic!

(Aaaand pfft, let's just go with, the wings are so magical that clothes fit around them without needing to be adjusted. XDDDD)
Hahaha! Now, those are the best kind of wings. ;) I'm sure Roland's wings work like that too, hahaha. XD; And he seems to be able to put them away.

Bwahahaha! People would think that, wouldn't they?
*imagines Sun flying over the city*

"Look, it's the Sun Knight!"
*everyone stares in awe and picks up feathers he drops*

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darkicedragon September 22 2011, 05:41:11 UTC
"Ahhh, can't have Sun hunched over! Think what that'd do to his posture! A Sun Knight with a hunched back?"
Bwahahaha! XDD
'The presence of the God of Light is heavy on him!'
'It's the wings!'

"Sun won't be able to reach his back. =P"
Pffffffft. If he tried, he'd just get a faceful of wings. XDDD
'I am not an owl!! How do I-??'

"But I think he should be able to do it with wind magic!"
That'll do. XDD He can push himself up with wind magic - but then his feathers will be all ruffled after. XDDDDD

"I'm sure Roland's wings work like that too, hahaha. XD;"
HA! Roland isn't wearing clothes for the wings to go around to begin with! :P

"And he seems to be able to put them away."
LAKSJFLSD I hadn't realised that the first time we saw his tattoo! I was just, 'eeeeeeee, he has tattoos!' and then when I was writing him no No True Pair, I realised he was missing something...

"*everyone stares in awe and picks up feathers he drops*"
Nooooo! *sob!* Stop stealing them - I can sell them so lots of gold ducats! They're for my retirement!

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lucathia_rykatu September 22 2011, 07:16:43 UTC
'The presence of the God of Light is heavy on him!'
'It's the wings!'
Pftt! Oh gosh! XD; Sun can never escape the God of Light's influence...

'I am not an owl!! How do I-??'
EEeeee, that just sounds adorable. Of course you're not a bird, Sun, but you do have wings now...

HA! Roland isn't wearing clothes for the wings to go around to begin with! :P
LOL FINE. Now I need to flip through the manhua again to see just what his wings look like and where exactly they're protruding from. I do have that part of the manhua, though not the chapter before it. XDDD;; *peers* Haha, okay, looks like his "clothes" really doesn't obstruct the wings at all. XD; Oooh, and it looks like his wings have talons at the end unlike the "claws" I'm imagining. XD;

Nooooo! *sob!* Stop stealing them - I can sell them so lots of gold ducats! They're for my retirement!
Awww! XD; B-But they're so pretty...

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darkicedragon September 22 2011, 11:10:16 UTC
"Sun can never escape the God of Light's influence..."
Of course not! XDD

"Of course you're not a bird, Sun, but you do have wings now..."
Hmm. I didn't think about colour Sun's wings would be... XDDD

"Haha, okay, looks like his "clothes" really doesn't obstruct the wings at all."
XDD They're just, what, shoulder protectors?

" I do have that part of the manhua, though not the chapter before it."
So we won't see the wings until the last page of the fifth volume then? DDD: Aaaaages away! *peers at Roland on the cover* :O The tear marks! ...Those don't look like tear marks. XDD;;;

"Oooh, and it looks like his wings have talons at the end unlike the "claws" I'm imagining. XD;"
I'm...not sure what's the difference between a claw and a talon? X3;;

"Awww! XD; B-But they're so pretty..."
And they've been touched the God of Light! We will grow/stay healthy if we keep them!

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lucathia_rykatu September 22 2011, 21:53:37 UTC
I think his wings would either be white or golden. Both would look pretty. XD; Golden would match his hair more!

I was imagining the wrong thing for Roland's claws, so I'll need to rewrite that part of the description in an earlier part of my fic. XD;

And they've been touched the God of Light! We will grow/stay healthy if we keep them!
They might even glow with holy magic. XDD

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darkicedragon September 23 2011, 12:43:25 UTC
Or maybe he has both and it's in a pattern - so there's a sun on Sun's back *is bricked*

"They might even glow with holy magic. XDD"
Bwahaha! Sun's going to start getting worried about getting plucked clean when he's sleeping!

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lucathia_rykatu September 24 2011, 01:13:54 UTC
Ahahahaha! That would be quite pretty if there was a pattern to Sun's wings. XD;

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