Searching [Extra]

Jun 02, 2011 23:23

Fandom: Original fiction
Summary: Ariny is curious about her neighbour; Lesith just wants to go to sleep.
Rating: K
Notes: Set after Searching.
*wince* I was expecting this to be a humorous thing but oh jeez…
Genre: Urban fantasy
Word count: 910
Status: Complete

Stakeout )

character: shodin, character: marland, original: searching: extra, character: fion, fandom: original fiction

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lucathia_rykatu June 8 2011, 07:20:46 UTC
Ah, kids. So curious. It's a good thing for them they're not investigating anything dangerous here. They could have been in danger. =P

Really loved seeing Shodin through their POV! Don't get much description of either Marland or Shodin with Marland's POV. XD; I don't think Marland ever really paid much attention to Shodin's hair color?

"I… No? We were trying to remember the name of a tune that was stuck in our head."
Ahhhh, Shodin using the plural we. Feels a bit different~

I wonder how the kids would respond if they came face-to-face with Marland. (Now, if they see him eat chocolate, I bet they'd be even more surprised).

Ooh~, Fion is sure materializing a lot. :D

Pft, the ending. XD; Of course right? What better way to get your mind off of unpleasant stuff than making fun of bad plots... XD

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darkicedragon June 9 2011, 08:17:55 UTC
D: This. So much.

Pfft. I think Marland took notice of Shodin's hair colour once. Then the rest of it was 'his hair'. XDD

Hee~

XDD Marland would have to be injured for that! (And - and you're making me want to write fic a couple of years in the future where Lesith's older and he meets Marland again! *flails* But it doesn't make sense! Waugh!)

*grins* He properly knows how to! And Shodin's not doing it fast enough! XDD

XD Yup.

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