The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head

[erstwhiled]

Title: The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Word Count: 1,699
Rating: PG-15
Warning: (Non-graphic) sexual situations, beer and banter. 
Disclaimer: Not mine, very much not mine.
Summary: "Too much tongue? How would you know? It's never been in your mouth!" (Kink Meme fill for this prompt in which Harry and Louis

Comments

[elipie]

Chriiiiiiist i kind of love you a lot. This was ridiculously hot and perfect and is it strange that I found the banter just as hot as the actual kissing? And that last line, omg. Yes, please do have a rematch, darlings.

[erstwhiled]

omg thank you :)

banter is kind of hot though, it's not weird at all.

[mistrusts]

ugh yes this had all the things I love. banter would totally be foreplay with them and GRINDING ON COUCHES. idk why but sometimes (ha usually) I find it hotter than just straight up sex because there's something so needy about it like, we cannot even wait to get our pants off. just yeah this was totally them and totally wonderful.

[erstwhiled]

thank you :D

i do think it can be a lot hotter, it's just sort of desperate and i think a little more intimate, like 'i'm willing to put up with the discomfort of coming in my pants because it's with you'.

[erstwhiled]

thank you :)

[kokoromiya7]

Yay for kissing, lots of kissing, and dry humping and jizz in their pants ♪

[erstwhiled]

yes, yay!

i'm glad you like it :D

[kindofcrazy112]

This oneshot is all that is good and beautiful and perfect in the world.
Jskslaowprnvkdignrpqq I loved this so so much. The banter was wonderful and the progression of everything was hot and fantastic and mdkalroepgtnd.
I loved this.

[erstwhiled]

thank you so much :D