The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head

[erstwhiled]

Title: The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Word Count: 1,699
Rating: PG-15
Warning: (Non-graphic) sexual situations, beer and banter. 
Disclaimer: Not mine, very much not mine.
Summary: "Too much tongue? How would you know? It's never been in your mouth!" (Kink Meme fill for this prompt in which Harry and Louis

Comments

[starryhyles]

I love how competitive they are even after, well, orgasming. There should totally be a rematch, since I already enjoyed this so much. Also, yay, FOB.

[erstwhiled]

thank you, this made me laugh, i think it was your use of "well" tbh. i wouldn't be adverse to a rematch but we'll have to see, but this is not the last time i write harry/louis.

and yay! i've been on a nostalgic FOB kick.

[thesilverwitch]

Gosh, I really loved this. Especially the easy banter and how they just fell into place without any major awkwardness.

Awesome fic! <3

[erstwhiled]

thank you!!
i like to think they have such a relationship where it would take quite a bit for them to be awkward around each other.

i'm glad you liked it :D

[acciocreativity]

Oh my god, this is perfect. I don't know if I'm capable of forming coherent senectes yet or not but omg I'll give it a go.

You seriously managed to get all of my favourite things into one fic. Their banter was so realistic and your writing is gorgeous, ugh, literally a perfect fill. Way better than I could've expected or asked for or dreamed of or jdhafjfjd THANK YOU.

omg also, "If you want a rematch, Styles, just let me know."

I JUST WANT TO CURL UP AND DIE U G H.

(this is Bekka/thestylescharm if you didn't gather as much xD)

[acciocreativity]

Sentences* damn autocorrect

[erstwhiled]

Bless, I'm so happy you're happy with it.

It was such a wonderful prompt and like I said, I think it was a wonderful way to start writing Harry/Louis. It was calling to me, I think I had it open in a tab for like two hours just telling myself 'no, you have too much else to do'. Some excellent restraint I have tbqh.

That line was totally a last minute addition, I'd planned on having it end with Harry but it didn't feel right, I'm so so glad it worked out.

[tink15782]

this was amazing, and i just. yes. i loved it.

[erstwhiled]

thank you, i'm glad you liked it!

[erstwhiled]

thank you!

ugh kissing and a little bit of sarcasm is so great, i'm really happy you liked it.