You've got a hole in you the size of the moon 2

Mar 19, 2010 00:06

AU fic. None of it is real.

Selena is Eddie's niece that got lost in the foster care system. Demi is famous, but spoiled and rather reluctant to take in her mother's husband's relative.  Thanks to Yummyhippomeat for providing the inspiration to keep writing this.

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fic: demi/selena

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yummyhippomeat March 19 2010, 07:22:44 UTC
Woah, this was so good. I especially like how you wrote it from the perspective of the social worker, how you showed her regret and how she really wants to help and not just that she's a heartless bitch like she seemed to be.

Keep going pleeasseee!!! :)

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erickson_stella March 19 2010, 19:46:54 UTC
This thing will probably be a bit more similar to the au high school thing I wrote last summer with the shifting perspectives and more character insight. I really like to wander off with secondary characters, hence this part, but the main focus will be the girls.

I am really glad you liked it :D

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yummyhippomeat March 19 2010, 21:28:05 UTC
I like pretty much everything you write :)

And I love the character development you give, kinda like you did Dianna in your au high school thing (Which I can't remember the name of I'm so lame)

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erickson_stella March 20 2010, 15:16:35 UTC
haha no it's cool, if I could change anything about that one it would so be the name. I got the lyrics wrong for a song.

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yummyhippomeat March 21 2010, 06:48:55 UTC
Meh it's a good name, better than I could've thought of lol.

*shameless pimping is shameless* Split Personality Selena posted on my journal :)

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havok March 21 2010, 12:16:08 UTC
Loving this! I really hope you continue. :) Sometimes some epic angst and dark stuff is what I really need. And you write very well!

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erickson_stella March 26 2010, 20:20:51 UTC
Thank you and I am glad you like it. Looks like I am going to continue with it now that I've got the outline done.

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agarza1538 March 24 2010, 01:17:52 UTC
WOW just read both chapters and i seems as if this story could be completely heart breaking for Selena and i would love to find out where the story can take us. Thank you

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erickson_stella March 26 2010, 20:21:28 UTC
It definitely won't be a happy go lucky piece. I am really glad that you like it and thank you for commenting.

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thefantasmickah April 22 2010, 03:59:37 UTC
LOVE.

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erickson_stella April 23 2010, 18:54:13 UTC
:)

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