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Away

Jul 09, 2009 18:05

Title: Away 1/?
Author: Pagespan
Characters: Erica
Rating: PG13
Summary: Erica returns to Seattle a few months after she left Callie standing in the parking lot and discovers her own neighborhood (some would say 'gayborhood') is the place to run into people she knows. Or: Erica goes looking for some equipment. (Mention of Callie)

Disclaimer: "All ( Read more... )

fanfic:erica hahn, rating:pg-13, art:fanfiction, writer:pagespan

Comments 12

flowdeborah July 10 2009, 01:38:42 UTC

I like this and can't wait to find out who else ERICA knows in the district.

pagespan July 12 2009, 00:24:54 UTC

Thanks for being the first to reply to my first fan fic attempt. I really appreciate it. I've been daydreaming about this story for a while and it's fun to write it.

hottielibrarian July 10 2009, 03:07:42 UTC

OMG! Nice cliffhanger! I have no idea who it could be?! Please update ASAP!

pagespan July 12 2009, 00:28:23 UTC

Thanks for commenting. I'm working on pt 2 and enjoyed hearing that you kept on reading. It really is a small town you know... ;)

raventat July 10 2009, 10:44:31 UTC

I really hope you continue this. I'd like to know if she regrets it in the end

pagespan July 12 2009, 00:30:27 UTC

Thanks! I was trying to think about a scenario in which Erica might want to hold her ground a bit even if she didn't return to Seattle Grace. Regrets...well see.

hectic1 July 10 2009, 12:34:33 UTC

This was an interesting stroll through gaytown with our favorite heart surgeon. I liked it and I'm intrigued by who's bugging the reluctantly popular Dr. Hahn this time. Someone from Grace maybe? Could it be Yang? Oh, Cristina Yang, why do I love you so? Anyway, this is nice beginning and I'm looking forward to the the next part.

pagespan July 12 2009, 00:35:09 UTC

Thank you. I've always liked exploring the little worlds the fan fiction writers create, whether they're real or just inside someone's head and heart. I always wonder. Here, the book is a real one and so is the spa and uh, other things...well. More Yang love. Awesome. We'll see...

iahnhiatm July 10 2009, 18:58:38 UTC

Welcome to fanfiction. Gosh, you decided to post on your own without certain folks encouraging you with sparkle dust. Very mature of you! Hell, here's some sparkle dust anyway just to celebrateyour first fiction.

Hope you don't mind if I do the comment as I read thing otherwise I usually lose my first impressions by the end of the work.

Hush money definitely believable. Erica really had the chief in a difficult position and the hospital would have been financially crippled with lawsuits.

So did you as I did envision her home in Seattle to be the one that is in Burningeden's OHTM?

Erica Hahn didn’t run. *nods head* You got that right!

Loved the subliminal reasons for choosing the location of her house to begin with. Perhaps her subconscious already knew she saw 'leaves' even before she got her new glasses.

If she felt a little anonymous in her long sleeved shirt, black jeans and boots Definitely could see Erica enjoying some anonymity as she processes all this about herself ( ... )

pagespan July 12 2009, 00:43:21 UTC

Yeah!!! Sparkle dust AND a comment thing from you. Wow. I'm honored.
I did like Burningeden's OHTM picture and her vision of Erica's home but then one day when I had it really bad (man was I distracted last summer) I was walking in the neighborhood thinking about where Erica might live and I saw a very cute house that had a view of the lake in the other direction, out toward Bellevue--you know, where the bears live.
Wish I had more time to write this story today but it's off to work with me. Thank you.