Fic: Vapor

[eretria]

Title: Vapor
Author: eretria
Fandom: SGA
Genre: Slash, UST
Rating: PG-13
Summary: All in all, it wasn’t the worst that could have happened.
A/N: written for z_rayne’s prompt: John/Rodney, ceremonial steam hut - Thank you again for those files, Zoe. I do hope this repays some of the debts.
Beta-read: by the fabulous auburnnothenna and monanotlisa. Thank you for your patience and your

Comments

[panisdead]

Oooh, I love the ghost idea, and the did-they-or-didn't-they tease with the visions. Very nice.

[eretria]

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[claire]

Yum. Lovely!

[eretria]

Thank you!

[teaphile]

Wow. What a lovely slow burn.

[eretria]

Thank you!

[livrelibre]

This was a wonderfully sensual moment outside of time. Thanks!

[eretria]

It's strange that you should mention time, because while writing it, I got that same feeling - that they had stepped outside of time, into a sort of timeless moment that just stretched and stretched.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[munchkinofdoom]

Nope... flatly refuse to believe it was all a vapour-induced vision, and that the real story is that a bunch of dirty-minded, voyouristic old ladies were parked outside the sweatlodge, watching, waiting and then pulled them out the moment they collapsed... can't leave unconscious folks in steam-rooms after all, is dangerous!

Visions indeed... there was much cackling in the old ladies' lodges that night... two pretty men performing for them... hearthside stories to tell their daughters for generations... :)

Lovely, very atmospheric, more please...

[eretria]

It's all in the eye of the beholder, hm?

And, more? What is that, more? I'm sorry, but my inner translation button must have just broke. And it has taken my grammar with it.
Wie bitte?

[munchkinofdoom]

Wie bitte?

Nur ein bischen? Good grief, I last did german in high school 27 years ago, and am sure I spelt that wrong...

And just, anything. You don't have to add more to this (as it finished in a lovely spot, lecherous old ladies notwithstanding) but keep up the slashing!!

Not so sure on the epics 'though... :)

working, working working...

[eretria]

Almost correct. Only one s missing, so you're doing very well. :o)

but keep up the slashing!!

We'll see. In my heart, I'm more of a gen writer and enjoy exploring relationships outside of the sexual ones. But you never know. There are at least two to three more scenarios stuck in my head. So, maybe they'll come out to play. Their decision, really.

Not so sure on the epics 'though... :)

Do I hear a complaint there? Have we broken our first beta-reader?