Fic: Vapor

[eretria]

Title: Vapor
Author: eretria
Fandom: SGA
Genre: Slash, UST
Rating: PG-13
Summary: All in all, it wasn’t the worst that could have happened.
A/N: written for z_rayne’s prompt: John/Rodney, ceremonial steam hut - Thank you again for those files, Zoe. I do hope this repays some of the debts.
Beta-read: by the fabulous auburnnothenna and monanotlisa. Thank you for your patience and your

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[auburnnothenna]

I told you people would like it, didn't I?

Now I feel proud, just like I had anything to do with it beyond pointing out tenses.

[eretria]

Yes, yes, you did. You're a very good corrupter, my sweet.

just like I had anything to do with it beyond pointing out tenses.

*snort* You saved the bloody thing, dear. Remember my woes? And your handholding? And your lovely visual prompts? And the general being you? Yeah. So there.

[_minxy_]

Wow, this is your first foray into slash? What kept you? Hope to see more, actually, but the part I loved best has nothing to do with slash; it was John's memory of the elders telling him he may have had visions. So cool. Great turn.

[eretria]

Well, I had very tentative first steps in the huge story coming up that was co-written with Auburn, but for walking unaided? Yeah. This was the first.
And I'm really, really glad you liked the end. Open for interpretation, non?

[lunasky]

Oh my god...this was so wonderful. Have I told you my secret kink is UST? It's so rarely done and gosh, and this just hits it perfectly.

So absolutely sensual - I could feel the heat permeating the entire story and that kiss! Wow...that kiss...and then to think that he might have imagined it all. Wow...you're killing me, in absolutely the best way.

Gah. I should say more, but I'm speechless now. Just...guh...that kiss!

[eretria]

No, you didn't tell me, but you're right. Mostly you have RST, but I personally find UST so much more appealing, simply because it can go either way afterward. Nothing is set in stone. Which is not to criticise other writers, but just a general preference.

The kiss was a last minute addition, by the way. It wasn't in the concept, originally, but monanotlisa whined and complained so charmingly that I couldn't resist.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[angelhunter]

You rock. Seriously. This is one of the most sensual pieces of slash I have read in a long time.

[eretria]

Eeeeeee! (Sorry, that was just the utter glee that you read this).
I really hadn't expected to find you among the readers, so knowing that you liked it is like a double-chocolate chip muffin on a Sunday afternoon.

[filenotch]

Your first foray into slash?

I can name several long-term slashers who might dream to do it so well as this

[eretria]

Wow. That ... wow.
I'm sorry, but you have effectively rendered me completely speechless.