In which Q-chan takes a dagger to poetry and lets it bleed :)

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A long, long time ago, in a classroom far away, my brain was under attack by an urge to write poetry. So I did and then just as suddenly as it attacked...it left me D:
I haven't written any poems, let alone any good ones in a while, but today while on the train I got attacked again. So Voila...poems.

Critique? Comments? <3 OMFG. This is so

Comments

[edbreadkid11]

this is very... odd.
i have no critique for you.
it seems like you got it all on deviantart.

[seynee]

I love the third one. The last lines are beautiful ♥

No criticism at all since I don't write/read poems very much, so I know nothing about them. XD

YAY FOR GETTING BRACES OFF. I did mine around a year ago, and was never happier. ♥

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Yay. ♥
thank you.

yeah I'm not much of a poet either so I'm not sure how people critique it...maybe I should've posted it up in one of the comms.

CAN'T WAIT. Finally I'll be rid of the pain.