More SasuNaru

Aug 18, 2008 21:40

Title: Maybe Next Time
Summary: Until one of them decides to concede, they will keep on fighting each other, stuck in the same rut.
Warnings: Nothing!
A/N: Same concept as previous drabble, but way too more "purple prose"-like. Urgh.
MOAR angsty-ness. D:
but there's a fluffier 2nd one. :)

They are at a standstill, both breathing rather harshly from the ( Read more... )

naruto, drabble

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edbreadkid11 August 19 2008, 03:56:45 UTC
"So, Naruto and Sasuke edges around each"

shouldnt it be something liiiike
so like naruto and sasuke edge around each other for a few weeks.

the first one was like the other fic you just posted, but i liked this line:
"Still they fight, words hurled as punches, punches spoken like words."

and the second was cute, haha
i imagine saukra would be kind of happy, but nosy at the same time.
if they were still in school, i imagine shed be pissed
but if it were later i guess shed be like that

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shikanashi_kk August 22 2008, 07:53:03 UTC
THESECONDONE XD♥ And the ending of the first one just akdjskjgskdg *_______* WHYAREYOUSOAWESOME XD

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erase_away August 22 2008, 11:52:25 UTC
^____^ (Trying out new smiley faces)
♥ WHYAREYOUMADEOFWIN?

YOU NEED TO START READING NARUTO AGAIN. 'CAUSE THE MANGA IS AUH-MAZING!

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in response to bunny. DUCK!

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