Photographic Memories CH 4

May 19, 2009 02:44

One step forward... three steps back...
This was posted hastily so please forgive me!

Title: Photographic Memories
Pairings: Yoochun/Changmin
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slight Angst
Genre: Drama, Romance
A/N: I can already tell this will be too long for a One-Shot therefore I'm breaking it up into parts. I apologize for any confusion that may ( Read more... )

k-pop: fan fiction, yoomin

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nivani May 19 2009, 11:11:46 UTC
*looks at you teary eyed*
whaaat the hell is happening here? I thought he was confusing before, but now it goes all beyond that o-O Yoochun seems a bit mentally unstable XD I don't even know how to feel about it~ just...doon't eeend iit likee thaaat *wails*

here ♥ have my heart and give me a happy ending...
haha, j/k X'D

am first again! yay!

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ephemeral_blue May 19 2009, 22:20:31 UTC
*holds heart carefully* I will do my best not to break it ♥

Yoochun's mentality is rather unstable I should admit, but everything will unravel soon and you'll understand, promise!

Also... just wanted to let you know, I love your icons!! I have several! I hope you don't mind that I put a black border around the... eek They are awesome! *points to icon* I'm terrible at commenting but I always credit :-D

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nivani May 19 2009, 22:26:50 UTC
hehe, yep, I noticed ^^ and wondered what's with those black borders XD it's not some big alternation and since you credit, it's all ok by me ^^
thank you ♥

yay! we're each other's fans XDD

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ephemeral_blue May 19 2009, 22:46:16 UTC
Definitely your fan! If you wanted to make some YooMin icons I would strongly support you :-D :-D

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lady_akira May 19 2009, 11:59:52 UTC
omgosh sjfdfhsdgdsdgffasdasdfgf this is not some kind of action movie but so much suspense and my heart was pounding in my chest while i was reading this jfhhgsggdsfd. this is so captivating, the atmosphere you're creating and well-defined characters. though i was convinced they would kiss in the bathroom but the open ending is maybe even better. yoochun, wtf is with you? and changmin in white pants and black shirt djfhhfdhfd.

He can't focus with Yoochun corrupting his thoughts. He can’t do his job when all he can think about is the kiss, the kiss that weakened his knees, the kiss that left stars in his eyes so blinding he could hardly drive home without running into something.
this was so beautiful. i hope you have many chapters left because when the story is over i think i will spend the whole day crying. ugh.

and yes! i wish for happy ending. you're just too amazing, where were you hiding with your talent, baby? ♥

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ephemeral_blue May 20 2009, 00:23:46 UTC
You are so the best ever! I appreciate all of your thoughtful comments and you so encourage me to keep writing and keep trying to hold up to the story :-D

I am really going to try to make a happy ending, we'll just see where the muse takes me.

As for the hiding, I actually just discovered DBSK in feb of this year and recently started reading their fanfic about a month ago lol. So I'm still pretty green, but I have written in other fandoms before :-D

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lady_akira May 20 2009, 13:37:10 UTC
since when kdsfjhfhdhghsfhadggfd is thoughtful ;) the only thing i can do is to comment and praise your talent. but awww. i'm glad you discovered dbsk, you're needed in this fandom! :D

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shinchul303 May 19 2009, 12:15:37 UTC
That was really painful. REALLY painful.

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shinchul303 May 19 2009, 13:29:10 UTC
And BTW, what happened to that wonderful calm feeling I used to get reading this story? Instead I feel like someone just drilled a corkscrew through my heart.

Could it be you, ephemeral_blue?

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ephemeral_blue May 19 2009, 22:23:48 UTC
Awww! I shame myself sometimes. I am a humble servant to the master named Angst and I must write it always lol. It will get better, I promise, more calming chapters to come :-)

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jirurukyungmi May 19 2009, 12:15:54 UTC
YES SPOT!

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jirurukyungmi May 19 2009, 12:32:30 UTC
I... wow.. my breath is still going rapidly l ike a tornado..
Why? ;___;
Like shinchul303 said... REALLY painful
I could just see it in my mind how everything happend.. and my heart is still going crazy D8
Where have you been and why aren't you writing so much?! I want to read more and more! ♥♥♥♥♥

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ephemeral_blue May 20 2009, 09:15:22 UTC
♥ What great feedback!

You are too cute, I'm going to try and write more and more!!

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jirurukyungmi May 20 2009, 16:11:48 UTC
-headexplodesintoacolourred-

...thank you o////o

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ephemeral_blue May 19 2009, 22:47:31 UTC
Aw... I will try to restore it soon!

I punched a few times in my head while I wrote it, he did not go without punishment :-D

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