Comments | entourage_fest: Fic: Same Tune, Different Lyrics

ofangoriousone in entourage_fest

Fic: Same Tune, Different Lyrics

Aug 01, 2009 21:55

Title: Same Tune, Different Lyrics
Pairing: Vince/Eric
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Boys in tights, Turtle's mouth, un-betaed-ness
Prompt: #21 - Vince is a dancer with a New York company (modern, ballet, etc) and E works as security guard/janitor at the studio. Recent past or modern, E/Vince preferred

A/N: OP, forgive me? I fiddled with the prompt a bit, ( Read more... )

round 2

Comments 18

ms_soma August 2 2009, 04:27:09 UTC

I really enjoyed this little world you created here! Loved the Turtle-E-Vince dynamic you set up at dinner (this was a *great* Turtle!) - and you have a really great writing style, I would never have guessed it was unbeta'd. This was a delight to read, and just what I needed!

ofangoriousone August 2 2009, 16:23:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and that the writing doesn't sound too uneven - I was nervous about that.

gracepoetic August 2 2009, 17:45:14 UTC

I never would have thought to take Vince and E to this place, but you did it very well. I love the thought of Vince dancing for some reason, with his lithe grace it certainly seems possible. Wonderful story.

ofangoriousone August 2 2009, 18:56:06 UTC

Thanks! Glad it seemed plausible. It was fun, writing them into the dance world. : )

viewofsaturday August 3 2009, 05:43:17 UTC

MY PROMPT MY PROMPT!! and no its wonderful that you changed it! *runs off to read*

viewofsaturday August 3 2009, 05:53:55 UTC

LOVE YOU. seriously, this is amazing.

"Watching them, Vince imagined darting down a street, soaring one step ahead of dad’s angry hands with every bound."

... sigh. oh, vince. ADORE THIS AU , great job :)

ofangoriousone August 3 2009, 16:49:32 UTC

YAY! Hey, OP! I'm happy the changes worked for you, your prompt just wouldn't leave me alone. : )

rosenskimmer August 3 2009, 18:46:17 UTC

I love this whole set up...it's really unique. But it feels like just the beginning--I want to know more. What happens between that first hook-up and that first solo? What are E's aspirations beyond playing for ballet? Does he really love music, or is it just something to pay the bills and keep his Aunt happy? Don't take all this as a negative--you've made me want to know more, which is definitely a good thing. Are you going to play in this particular AU anymore? I think you really should. Good work!

ofangoriousone August 4 2009, 03:37:45 UTC

Oh, it's awesome to hear you found this interesting enough to want to know more. Thanks for your lovely comment. (and it's true, this definitely ended abruptly... I've always had problems pulling things to a close, haha).

I don't think there will be more to come but you never know. : )