Comments | entourage_fest: Fic: Same Tune, Different Lyrics

ofangoriousone in entourage_fest

Fic: Same Tune, Different Lyrics

Aug 01, 2009 21:55

Title: Same Tune, Different Lyrics
Pairing: Vince/Eric
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Boys in tights, Turtle's mouth, un-betaed-ness
Prompt: #21 - Vince is a dancer with a New York company (modern, ballet, etc) and E works as security guard/janitor at the studio. Recent past or modern, E/Vince preferred

A/N: OP, forgive me? I fiddled with the prompt a bit, ( Read more... )

round 2

Comments 18

ariadne83 August 5 2009, 10:59:21 UTC

I love this. It's a very sweet snapshot, and even though I'd love to have seen more, the implication that they've had all these happy years together while Vince built up his career is wonderful too.

ofangoriousone August 6 2009, 18:57:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. : )

coyotesuspect August 15 2009, 00:04:39 UTC

This is wonderful. The way you build up the relationship between Vince and E is absolutely perfect. Thanks for sharing.

ofangoriousone August 15 2009, 02:06:12 UTC

And thank you for your lovely review. : )

Cool de_tensai August 20 2009, 14:31:45 UTC

Love the first steps between E & Vin in renewing their friendship and the dynamics between Turtle, Johnny & the two are enjoyable to read :)

dancinbutterfly September 12 2009, 04:57:02 UTC

Okay so - i love the auditions scene - points for the movie idol charisma coming through. You kept the star quality on Vince and thats important to making an AU work. The history's good though a *little* tough to buy but you sell it well enough that it doesnt really matter and the fact that you so clearly know what you're talking about it.

Ugh, Johnny is Johnny and Turtle is Turtle and Dom is Dom and I just love it. I like how very little they care about the whole obvious fall that E and Vince have towards each other and I really like the super-cramped living space. It makes it all feel more real cause space is totally a premium. :D Rock on! I love this.

ceares December 15 2009, 11:22:33 UTC

Sorry it took so long getting around to commenting but this has been in my 'to read' pile for a while. I love this! You did a terrific job world building and yet kept them very much in character. I love how what works fine for Vince in acting--laziness, lack of discipline, stacked with luck and natural talent--just isn't enough for dance and once again, Eric popped in, the yang to his yin, and got them both to a better place.