Fic: The Idea of Order: Last Things

[enitharmonwept]

Title: The Idea of Order: Last Things

Pairing: Ten/Martha

Rating: NC-17

Setting: post-S4

Summary: What happens before, during, and after. Dark themes and situations.

A/N: A follow-on to the story written for persiflage_1.

Beta'd by the ever-radiant radiantbaby and the gracious persiflage_1

The Idea of Order: First Things can be found here

Comments

[persiflage_1]

This fic made me weep for Martha - but at least she died doing what she does best, protecting other people...

It's beautifully written and I love the timey-wimeyness of it...

(and the secksings hot!)

[fourzoas]

This fic made me weep for Martha - but at least she died doing what she does best, protecting other people...

You don't know how much I agonized over her death; I keep asking myself "can I save her?" but I just don't think I can. Sorry to make you cry, but thank you for understanding.

It's beautifully written and I love the timey-wimeyness of it...

That was the thing that made it (torturous) fun; I love strange timeline stories, and this was my first real go at one. Next time I'll try not to kill anyone.

(and the secksings hot!)

*blushes* There had to be something good...

[prof_pangaea]

ahhh yes, i love time travel stories. very awesome.

[fourzoas]

Thanks! I've always found time travel stories intriguing and I'm glad you enjoyed mine!

[mischief89]

Ok...I'm not afraid to admit it that I'm crying write this. This was sooo amazing I can't even put it into words. Just...beautiful.

[fourzoas]

*hugs*

I'm sorry that I made you cry, but thank you for thinking it was beautiful--that makes my day!

[mischief89]

::hugs back:: Don't be sorry, take it as a compliment! You're good at capturing emotions :)

[fourzoas]

Thanks! I'm just glad people are enjoying the story--even if it leaves them weeping!

[in_the_end]

Ooh, I could read this again and again.

[fourzoas]

Wow--thanks! When I imagine the story, it's this mobius strip that just keeps sucking you into alternative choices that go nowhere. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Re: The Best of Times and the Worst of Times

[fourzoas]

*hugs* Thanks.