Fic: The Idea of Order: Last Things

[enitharmonwept]

Title: The Idea of Order: Last Things

Pairing: Ten/Martha

Rating: NC-17

Setting: post-S4

Summary: What happens before, during, and after. Dark themes and situations.

A/N: A follow-on to the story written for persiflage_1.

Beta'd by the ever-radiant radiantbaby and the gracious persiflage_1

The Idea of Order: First Things can be found here

Comments

[evilawyer_fic]

Nice shifting of verb tenses. Very neat!

[fourzoas]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed, grammar and all! :-D

[radiantbaby]

You already know how absolutely, positively in love with this story I am, but, of course, I had to repeat it yet again!

Thank you so much for including me on your journey writing this, it was so amazing to watch it come to life and read all the twists and turns of how the story finally took shape.

It is a heartbreaking story, of course -- poor Ten and Martha caught up in a perpetual loop that seals them together to repeat again and again this time of both passion and loss -- but it is also so very beautiful as well.

This is definitely one of my favorite stories I've ever read. Wonderful job, you!

[fourzoas]

Thank you so much for including me on your journey writing this, it was so amazing to watch it come to life and read all the twists and turns of how the story finally took shape.

Thank you for coming along--I'll bet you didn't expect this much of a journey when I asked you to beta that birthday fic almost a month ago! I've really appreciated your input!

It is a heartbreaking story, of course -- poor Ten and Martha caught up in a perpetual loop that seals them together to repeat again and again this time of both passion and loss -- but it is also so very beautiful as well.

I keep trying to find a way out, but you have to go much further back to undo this one, I'm afraid. Those two are always coming at each other from the wrong angles and ends...

This is definitely one of my favorite stories I've ever read. Wonderful job, you!

*blushes* Thank you!

[voicegrl]

Holy sh*t! That was beautiful, sad, enormously sweet, and very well done! I'm still wiping the tears and sniffling. Thank you for posting this.

[fourzoas]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, even if it made you cry! Thanks for reading!

[voicegrl]

Are you kidding? I love your fics! And it was a good cry!

[80sgirl80]

Beautifully written, and moving. Seriously, I can't stop crying right now. Poor Ten. Poor Martha. There are only a few fanfic writers who are brilliant enough to move me to tears, and you have just been added to that list.

[fourzoas]

Thank you; I really appreciate your comment and am so glad you enjoyed my story so much. Come back and visit; I'm currently working on a series of short views into the three years they traveled together, but they're only being posted on this journal for now (I'll archive them at Teaspoon in batches when the whole arc is finished).

[abstruse_fangrl]

Eek! This was so well written. The intricacy of the storyline really pulled me in. And,well, the secksings weren't too shabby either! *lol*

I really enjoyed this.

[fourzoas]

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it! I had a great time writing it, and the idea wouldn't let go (and still hasn't--there are several snapshots already up on my fic journal of the goings on during their travels).