Comments | englishblue: Alligator Man

englishblue

Alligator Man

Nov 09, 2009 11:01

Well, now for something completely different, as they used to say on Monty Python. The WIPs are languishing. But here's a one shot I've been working on for awhile ( Read more... )

au, alligator man, jensen/jared, r

Comments 43

apieceofcake November 9 2009, 20:02:04 UTC

ACK! My only comfort here is that he/both aren't very nice people! LOL!

englishblue November 9 2009, 20:33:03 UTC

No they're not. They've both led hard lives and the fight for survival in their world doesn't allow for friends. :(

neros_violin November 9 2009, 20:06:40 UTC

Loved it! There's something about Jensen that makes him believable as a cold blooded killer, lol. The atmosphere and tone were spot on, put me right there in the keys wearing thin linen pants. The ending was so matter of fact, it was perfect. It was like reading an excerpt from an Elmore Leonard novel. GUH. SO GOOD!

englishblue November 9 2009, 20:34:29 UTC

Yay!!! You darling, you! Make my day why don't you? Thank you bushels.

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englishblue November 9 2009, 20:37:37 UTC

I'm glad it didn't upset you. And the ending was ambiguous. Jared could have survived. Maybe. They're both damaged people in a violent world.

Thank you, hon, for commenting!

the_curlyone November 9 2009, 20:22:29 UTC

So sad and so wonderful.

englishblue November 9 2009, 20:38:46 UTC

Thank you, sweetie!

zubeneschamali November 9 2009, 20:24:20 UTC

*meep!*

I love how ambiguous they both are; Jared says he could never kill Jensen, but why did he pull a gun on him right away? And in a lot of ways, it's crueler to do what Jensen did than to just shoot Jared...

I want to know what happens next, but I also think this is perfect the way it is.

englishblue November 9 2009, 20:41:13 UTC

I was meeping when I was writing this. I like making the boys walk on the dark side for a change. It's fun. I'm glad you liked the ambiguousity (new word.) :D