Red River Love Song Chapter 3

[englishblue]

This has been a struggle. I have captured my muse and chained her to a wall. Poked her with a sharp stick. She doesn't like it, but at least she let me finish this bit of RRLS. You might notice I've changed the title somewhat, combined it with the subtitle. I like that better, I think.

I found the icon I'm using <------ especially for when I

Comments

[candygramme]

Well now, it seems as if Sam's a little conflicted, doesn't it?

I really love the idea of Dean lying there in the water gazing upat Sam. It's a mental image I'll carry with me through the rest of the day. Pretty.

Poor Dean - he really needs a compadre who will keep watch for him while he sleeps, doesn't he? Gee, I wonder who that could be.

I love this for its detail, and for your lovely word pictures - so easy to visualise things as I read. I'm glad your mojo worked for you again. Give it a cookie and tell it I love it!

[englishblue]

I think Sam's priorities are getting shifted around the more time he spends with Dean. Though he's still planning on taking him back for a necktie party.

I'm glad you liked the Dean in the water image. I'm kind of partial to that one myself. Dean all sprawled out between Sam's booted heels. Yup. There may be more on that mext chapter.

Thank you so much, lovely. My shiny, shiny picture is peeking at you and just about to smile. :)

[englishblue]

Hey, sweetheart. Before anything, I have to say how much I loved your Jensen in bed manip. I'll be thinking about that one all day. *happy sigh*

I'm so glad you like Dean's voice in this. Sometimes it's hard writing aus and getting the characters to still be like the original in a different setting. You are a wonder! I'm giving you a gold star for reading this just the way I hoped you would.

You make me better than I am and I love you for it. And for yourself too. :D

[sam_dean_lover]

i have never read a western story like this..its amazing

[englishblue]

Thank you! What a totally wonderful thing to say.

[angels3]

Deans whole week is sucking ass isn't it?

Can't wait to see what they get up to next.

[englishblue]

He's having a pretty bad time of it. If it's not Sam, it's Indians. Now Sam's got him again. The poor guy is black and blue and kind of turned on by the pushy sheriff. Should be interesting to see how it goes. :D

[mangacat201]

Oh I totally love this story to bits. I mean, the way Dean gets himself in trouble each and every time. the last line WMEAWHAEWHEAWHawehwaehawe.. the kiss... WMEAHWWAEHWEAHWEAHwae... one thing though, how did he get that saddle for Belle when he had to leave with her unsaddled? And were's Sam's horse??
Cat

[englishblue]

Ahhh. No saddles. They're both riding bareback (try not to think about that too much) and Sam is on one of the Indian ponies. The Indians nabbed Belle when they got Dean.

Sam's horse got left behind when Dean figured he was far away enough to let him go. I should have made that clear and didn't. I'll have to see if I can slip it in when no one is looking. Thanks, sweetie, for reminding me.

I'm thrilled you like this. Encouraging words make a big difference.

[mangacat201]

Oh yeah, I try not to think about it too much either MWAHWAHWAHwa
Cat

[englishblue]

Me neither. If I think about it, my brains goes into freeze mode. :D