Red River Love Song Chapter 3

Jul 06, 2009 12:17

This has been a struggle. I have captured my muse and chained her to a wall. Poked her with a sharp stick. She doesn't like it, but at least she let me finish this bit of RRLS. You might notice I've changed the title somewhat, combined it with the subtitle. I like that better, I think.

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red river valley, sam/dean, au, cowboys, fanfic, nc-17

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apieceofcake July 6 2009, 21:53:20 UTC
Lovely visuals, especially at the end *g* Thanks!

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englishblue July 6 2009, 22:04:32 UTC
My pleasure and thank you, sweet Jo! Glad I could give you a picture for a change.

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pigeongirl99 July 6 2009, 22:04:20 UTC
Still finding this so enjoyable! You've a real eye for detail, and I'm very much intregued as to where this is going to end up.

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englishblue July 6 2009, 22:07:09 UTC
Hooray and thank you! It's a long and twisted trail they're riding. I hope you'll like it when the sunset comes!

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earthquakedream July 6 2009, 22:25:06 UTC
Eeeee, baby, I love this! The words alone had me practically sweating in my seat, worried about Dean, but of course Sam came to save the day, if only so he could kick Dean's ass himself. ;) Wonderful chapter!

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englishblue July 6 2009, 22:43:08 UTC
Squeeeeee. *Loves on you lots*

I'm tickled you liked the chapter. Sam is definitely there to save the day in his own special way. Which does involve some ass kicking, I have to admit. But there are other things on his mind too. Very naughty things. They also involve Dean's backside. Wait. What? :D

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earthquakedream July 6 2009, 22:48:06 UTC
I often think very naughty things about Dean's backside too. I don't blame Sam at all ;)

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englishblue July 6 2009, 22:51:55 UTC
I knew it! We're soulmates!!

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serendip50 July 6 2009, 23:05:35 UTC
As always love your words and the way they entertain the reader with sparking visuals and delightful monologue.

And Dean's characteristic profanities make me giggle. Such a smart-ass. Although maybe Sam is the clever one here:).

That last scene is very provocative....pure temptation....yum. Hugs xx

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englishblue July 7 2009, 01:05:18 UTC
I had such a clear picture of that last scene with Dean sprawled out, soaking wet, between Sam's boots.

I always worry about new chapters. It's good to know you liked this one and the dialogue. That makes me very happy. Thanks so much, bb. xx

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englishblue July 7 2009, 01:14:34 UTC
Sam's just beginning to realize Dean is more than a "thieving varmit" that has a date with the gallows. But he's a man of strong moral fiber.

There's going to be wrestling involved. More than one kind. Sound promising?

I've never cured a headache before. That's wonderful, and I'm so glad you're feeling better. *hugs*

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englishblue July 7 2009, 01:31:58 UTC
Hee. Glad I could make you smile.

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