Comments | enchanter: [fic] Yami no Matsuei // The Things Between, Tatari, light R

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[fic] Yami no Matsuei // The Things Between, Tatari, light R

Jul 12, 2007 23:36

The Things Between July 11-12th, 2007
YnM // Light R // Watari/Tatsumi // romance/character study // 2,300 words // complete

Music: Neverending White Lights :: Littlepiece

Written for aluragayle to whom I have promised a Tatari fic, and for jtriskell for helping me restore some faith in my writer!self. ♥

( Set friendship on fire and it will erupt, pull its victims into a whirlwind of change. )

tatari, fic, ynm

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aluragayle July 12 2007, 22:07:17 UTC

kakljgl;kjbls...
;_;

I just... um... yeah...
this is made of awesome. Guh. It's so telling, about both of them... and lyrical, tender and a bit hesistant but sprinkled through with these moments of - utter love. Fantastic.
And not to mention, f'ing hot, too. >.>

*clings to* I've mised your Yami writings.

I love you. ♥

enchanter July 13 2007, 07:53:51 UTC

XD I suppose I just had to stop worrying about how to write them, and just... actually DO it. Duhhh.

Hee, I've missed my Watari and Tatsumi, too.

♥~! Glad you liked!

lady_elina July 13 2007, 02:29:20 UTC

I don't read fic often in this fandom and I'm notoriously bad at commenting, but this piece engaged me thoroughly and I had to let you know how much I enjoyed it.

This is wonderfully in character, beautifully constructed through showing instead of telling, and a lyrical, evocative read. I'd go as far as saying it's quite possibly the best Tatsumi/Watari piece I've come across.

Thank you for sharing this excellent story, it's always a joy to find skillfully crafted fan fiction!

enchanter July 13 2007, 07:54:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm sure there are tons of far better Tatari fics, but I'm glad you liked this one so much. Appreciate the comment, thanks!

t_amara July 13 2007, 03:34:27 UTC

Sweet, amazingly hot, and with an undercurrent of uncertainty that shrieks 'them'. I rather feel for dear Watari - TallDark&Scary would be a hell of a romantic problem - but our mad scientist DOES love complex problems, doesn't he? And I think he'd have Tatsumi's love for the rest of eternity once he caught him.

T'Amara

enchanter July 13 2007, 07:55:05 UTC

TallDark&Scary would be a hell of a romantic problem

No kidding! Heheh.

Thank you -- I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥

leximon July 13 2007, 14:37:18 UTC

I warned you I'd read whatever you write ;)
It's absolutely lovely, captivating, and, for once, Watari gets something for trying so hard :)
No reason to be afraid of writing at all, dear, you still know how to keep your readers trembling with the characters you write about!
You rock :)

enchanter July 14 2007, 20:44:29 UTC

Heeee. :D Well, my Watari got quite a lot, at least in the one-shot gift!fics I did. ::wicked grin::

Ah well, you see, knowing I can technically write something decent doesn't really stop the fear... it surfaces when I've had a long break from writing in general, and then it can't be helped in any way other than, well, sitting down and writing something I'm satisfied with. So it's a bit of a vicious circle until I get over myself and do it already. :D

Thanks for reading. :D ♥

_silverfox July 13 2007, 20:26:04 UTC

Beautifully written. It actually made me care for Tatsumi which I usually don't. Great work. :)

enchanter July 14 2007, 20:45:21 UTC

...and now your comment has given me a vague fic idea... :D ::love!::

I'm glad you liked -- thanks for reading.

_silverfox July 16 2007, 18:12:27 UTC

*stares at comment* That little thing? *very curious*

enchanter July 16 2007, 18:25:55 UTC

Yep, that little thing. Sometimes it really doesn't take much... :D

I'm not entirely past my ridiculous fear of failure in the writing department, but once I do manage to cough up one semi-decent piece, it gets easier from there. And odd things start to happen, like the return of that mysterious 'inspiration' thing everyone keeps talking about.

Teeheee. :D

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