My Fuzzy Valentine - Pt 2

[enchanted_april]

Another short part, but I'm pressed for time! Hope you're still enjoying it. Steve will make his appearance in the next part :)

Comments

[jaredsexual]

I love Wilson. :)

[brennamount]

heheheh Loved the chapter!! Wilson=love!! One wee thing I noticed near the end.

"Maybe if I get a pet rat, she’s take an interest in me.”

she's should be she'll?

[enchanted_april]

Quite right! Fixed it :)

Thanks... I'm glad you like it so far.

[yutamiyu]

See, this is why you need to run writing by your beta.

...so there.

(loveyoudon'thateme)

[enchanted_april]

HA! Touche!

Very true, but I'm at work and IM is not working... and you know I've never been a patient woman ;) How do you like it so far?

[flame_of_death]

Fantastic! I loved it.

Especially Wilson.

:D

[strangedazey]

My Fuzzy Valentine rocks! Loved Wilson's last line.

[re_eth_ke]

Then you engage in some sort of slow motion, rat-induced courtship with Cameron. *snicker*