the east wind, chapter 5.

[emletta]

Mai liked her job. No she loved it.  ‘Informant’ was a nice euphemism for what Mai did. She found things out, things for Zuko mostly. Something in her grumpy bored disposition made people want to tell her things. She didn’t often have to use her daggers, but she wasn’t opposed to bringing them out when necessary. Since becoming Firelord, Zuko had

Comments

[deleonjh]

Your characterizations are excellent, I especially liked how Azula acted because I can see her saying exactly the same thing. However, I wish you'd check your stuff over more, you keep mixing up homonyms - hi vs. high, tow vs. toe, etc. And the act of swanning has two "n"s. These things aren't a deal breaker but they do detract from the reading experience.

[emletta]

thanks so much for your comment!I'm glad you enjoyed Azula's scene. I always thought she'd go brilliantly eccentric after the comet. I've edited my post again to fix up the mistakes you've pointed out (except for the hi vs high. I couldn't find that one). Thanks for pointing them out, I'm terrible at seeing my own mistakes!

[deleonjh]

The "high" one was from a previous chapter, sorry but can't remember which.