OK, as the author of the last line I demand you never keep us hanging like that anymore!!! Just when we got to the angst!!! I had butterflies through the entire second half of the fic, when she started crying. Because that feeling must be so overwhelming! To fall in love with someone who's very much attached, and he falls in love with you, too, and he let's everything happen and you know that you don't ever want to be with another man and yet you can't have him for good. That's just terrible. And that's why this fic is so brilliant. MORE EMI!
I just found you journal a week ago and i have problably read the entire chapter at least 5 times.
You are very talented and i realy can't wait for more.
I have some ideas for you. when you will have them together in public maybe a scene in a restaurant that can turn hot hands under the table...and also them having sex in a car.
For the emotionnal aspect I think you doing great. Follow the line of their future...get married, baby and maybe you can write a scene about Matt becoming jealous at on point, pregnancy scare or evie becoming pregnant what reactions would they have.
I am a huge fan and continue youre beautiful work.
okay I finally read this and wow so amazingly hot and sexy, yet beautiful and emotional. without a doubt one of the best fics I've read. I really hope you'll update more, I want more lol.
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I had butterflies through the entire second half of the fic, when she started crying. Because that feeling must be so overwhelming! To fall in love with someone who's very much attached, and he falls in love with you, too, and he let's everything happen and you know that you don't ever want to be with another man and yet you can't have him for good. That's just terrible. And that's why this fic is so brilliant.
MORE EMI!
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I just want to say that you get better on each chapter.
Not talking about the chapter. not talking about the mavie. talking about you.
You're the greatest writter I've seen. I'm a fan, and I just can't hide it, it's really really a pleasure to read your fanfic and deal with you on FF.
Congrats for you amazing work and for being a mavier giving the others this lovely present each chapter.
Thank you!
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You are very talented and i realy can't wait for more.
I have some ideas for you. when you will have them together in public maybe a scene in a restaurant that can turn hot hands under the table...and also them having sex in a car.
For the emotionnal aspect I think you doing great. Follow the line of their future...get married, baby and maybe you can write a scene about Matt becoming jealous at on point, pregnancy scare or evie becoming pregnant what reactions would they have.
I am a huge fan and continue youre beautiful work.
Julie
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