Death Sentence

[emda]

Title: Death Sentence

Pair: Jaesu

Author:
emda

Length: 271 words

Warning: Character Death
A/N: Un-revise. I apologize for all the mistakes and wrong tenses.

Comments

[dorkii_simba]

SPOT FOR CUBBY!!!!!

[dorkii_simba]

That...
was absolutely amazing. Deep and I loved the two last sentences. ♥ Keep up the good work Unnie!!! Love you!
♥ Cub

[emda]

thanks cub... Im just trying out rie recommendation but still suck that the muse hit my head when I have to sleep.
I'll try to keep on.
Love you too.

[thyluvlyname212]

WOW. DEEPLY...UNIVERSAL. the cold harshness of death of a loved one. wow. sry, i didn't know how to comment on here. it didn't have a "post comment" link..^_^"""
GREAT JOB. sry but i didnt get this entirely...yes, my head IS that thick. =/

[baboboy]

Because the sun of my life, the sunshine in the shy of my heart lied death cold in some table at the city morgue

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noooooooooooooo!

[emda]

*pads head* thanks for reading and commenting

[akaxiah]

needs a little beta-ing, but i like ♥ i mean it was painful, and you wrote it really well. good job!

[emda]

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'll try to do better the next time. :)

[junsu_hyung]

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*sniffles* So sad but so beautiful, too!
*sobs and rubs tears away*

[emda]

aawww bb *hugs and kiss your tears away* Im sorry and Im glad that you like it.
I hope you are okay. Miss you subear

[junsu_hyung]

*blushes* I'm ok. I miss you too, BooBear. *snuggles*

[emda]

*snuggles back* *gasp* soon is your birthday bb
What u been up to? Is been so long since I talk to you. I hope everything is okay. Love you Subear!!!!