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Death Sentence

Jun 22, 2008 15:32

Title: Death Sentence

Pair: Jaesu

Author:
emda

Length: 271 words

Warning: Character Death
A/N: Un-revise. I apologize for all the mistakes and wrong tenses.

( A busy city, people chatting like nothing, without a fucking care. )

yaoi, junsu, dbsk, jaesu, jaejoong, drabbles

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dorkii_simba June 22 2008, 20:37:27 UTC

SPOT FOR CUBBY!!!!!

dorkii_simba June 22 2008, 20:50:02 UTC

That...
was absolutely amazing. Deep and I loved the two last sentences. ♥ Keep up the good work Unnie!!! Love you!
♥ Cub

emda June 22 2008, 20:55:31 UTC

thanks cub... Im just trying out rie recommendation but still suck that the muse hit my head when I have to sleep.
I'll try to keep on.
Love you too.

thyluvlyname212 June 23 2008, 01:50:10 UTC

WOW. DEEPLY...UNIVERSAL. the cold harshness of death of a loved one. wow. sry, i didn't know how to comment on here. it didn't have a "post comment" link..^_^"""
GREAT JOB. sry but i didnt get this entirely...yes, my head IS that thick. =/

emda June 23 2008, 02:33:33 UTC

thanks
the comment link says write a verse.
and what didnt you get?

thyluvlyname212 June 23 2008, 02:34:49 UTC

lol, uh basically who's dead...is it JunSu?? TT_TT

emda June 23 2008, 02:39:19 UTC

yes
Junsu was the one who died.

thyluvlyname212 June 23 2008, 02:44:30 UTC

BWAHHHHHHHH...oh well. nice job! =D. jkjk, i didnt' mean the whole "oh well" thing.

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