...Believable storylines, punctuation, I don't need insanely good grammar, but knowing how to properly construct a sentence is nice.
The real pet peeve that I have though is when it's like... relationships move too far, too fast? Like, "Oh, hey! We just met yesterday, but I've already fallen madly in love with you! Let's fuck like bunnies! :D"
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The worst ones are the people who put in these Japanese and spell them wrong or used it in a different meaning.
Don't remember where but I will never forget this line:
"But then I'm a Shotacon, you know? The girls dig shotacons right now."
Said by a character who's... 13?
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The real pet peeve that I have though is when it's like... relationships move too far, too fast? Like, "Oh, hey! We just met yesterday, but I've already fallen madly in love with you! Let's fuck like bunnies! :D"
ARGHHHHH.
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DO IT DO IT DO IT xDDDDD
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I CAN'T DO ON THE SPOT CRAP LIKE THAT, LOLOLOLOL.
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Emi: hi baka-chan i love ur stry plz keep writing!!! ^_______^
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great story too btw <(''<)
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Man, I'm super-busy right now or I would totally wrote you godawful fanfiction. :
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I LUV UR FIC SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ KEEP WRITING EVEN IF U GET BAD FLAMEZ. HTEIR ONLY JEALUZ!!!! LOL!
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AWWW I'LL MAKE SURE TO KEEEP WRITTING OKAY!!! KEEP REVIEWING PLZ!!!! <333333!!!
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ELCERIST IS GROSSSSSSS
ROYxED 4EVA
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