Comments | embolalia: Prologue: Chapter 6

embolalia

Prologue: Chapter 6

May 07, 2011 10:40

Title: Prologue (chapter 6)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Angst
Pairing: Kara/Zak and Kara/Lee
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Summary: Daybreak flashbacks, extended edition. Kara meets Carolanne.

( Kara turns in her cockpit and stares into his eyes, through two helmets, two windshields and a dozen feet of vacuum. She can hear her pulse pounding in her ears. )

pre-mini, lee/kara, fanfiction

Comments 11

elzed May 7 2011, 15:39:27 UTC

Oh, dude, the angst, THE ANGST. Also the UST (well, unresolved again after having been resolved, iykwim) and the longing and the ANGST. Of which, so much more to come...

I really like this.

embolalia May 7 2011, 16:48:40 UTC

I'm so glad! And who would Lee and Kara be, really, without the angst? And UST of course.

koolaidmom11 May 7 2011, 20:18:55 UTC

Ok, I just read the whole thing through...I'm hoping i don't die from all the angst here but this is frakking awesome. Can't wait to read more.

Love all this pre mini fic!!!

embolalia May 7 2011, 20:44:58 UTC

Thanks! The rest of the chapters should be up in the next few days.

justascrewup2 May 7 2011, 21:21:28 UTC

I just shotgunned this whole thing today and I am loving it! You've got all of the characters down so well that it's like you've been writing them for years.

Sad to read in the comments for the last chapter that this will be an in canon story, so no happy ending, but we've always known that there was more to the pre-mini story that what little was shown in the show.

Welcome to the fandom and thanks for sharing your fic with us. Looking forward to seeing what comes next :)

embolalia May 7 2011, 21:33:56 UTC

Thanks so much! Yeah, I tend to stick close to canon so the ending is inevitable, but hopefully I'll add some interesting or thought-provoking details along the way :)

rdave1 May 10 2011, 13:09:23 UTC

Oh the angst! You do angst very well. I'm holding my breath reading this. YIKES!

wicked_sassy January 24 2012, 01:18:52 UTC

YES, this is the exact scene I was thinking of that explains the photo of the three of them and why Lee looks so uncomfortable, why Kara's not looking at the photographer, and why Zak is so oblivious and happy. You're a master, Em!

embolalia January 24 2012, 02:59:13 UTC

Thanks! This is my personal head!canon, I'm glad you like it too :)