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em_sh

Fic: One More Lap

Feb 24, 2010 23:25

Title: One More Lap
Characters: Naomi/Emily
Rating: M (for language)
Words: 1202
Summary: Emily's tired of being the one to be brave.
Disclaimer: Not my characters

( One More Lap )

naomily, fanfiction, naomi is not a twat, emily is gay

Comments 17

thecon12 February 24 2010, 23:33:25 UTC

Oh, this was so lovely♥

em_sh February 24 2010, 23:40:20 UTC

I'm really glad you think so! It's a bit different from what I've done before, so <3

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em_sh February 25 2010, 00:05:33 UTC

Thanks, dude!

lazyhazy8228 February 25 2010, 00:23:35 UTC

This is exactly how I would paint Emily's feelings. You did a really great job explaining the story from her POV. Great job :)

em_sh February 25 2010, 18:09:17 UTC

Cheers mate :)

theatrebob1 February 25 2010, 00:51:44 UTC

I'm with thecon12

this is absolutely lovely.

It simultaneously broke and warmed my heart. Gave me hope in naomily. Especially the last stanza. gah, so good.

em_sh February 25 2010, 18:10:31 UTC

Thanks very much! I'm glad you got a little bit of hope from it!

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em_sh February 25 2010, 18:11:16 UTC

Ta much :)