Fic: All the PI’s Men (Logan/Veronica, Ensemble) NC-17 (1/7)

[em2mb]

Title: “All the PI’s Men”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Logan/Veronica, Mac, Keith, Weevil, Wallace, Piz, Sacks.
Word Count: 9,754
Rating: NC-17, and not always the good kind. This chapter is tamer than what’s to come, but you’ve been warned: it’s dark and twisty.
Summary: Dammit, Veronica, he thought. Are you starting to see what it does

Comments

[midnight_27]

I always look forward to your writings and this one did not disappoint.

I can't wait to see where you go with this. The tension and anger is so real and heart-breaking.

Is it okay to 'friend' you?

[em2mb]

Just friended you. Hope you don't mind. :) I really want to get to know people better within the VM fandom. Everyone comes out and supports me and leaves all these great comments when I post fic, and I never seem to do anything in return. Here's to changing that.

Thanks for reading!

[mishane]

OOOO

Very very very interesting start. I'm so looking forward to this!

[em2mb]

Thanks!

[motylik]

Man, this is dark. Really dark. I read the warning, but man. It's really well written but really painful to read. I know Logan didn't kill Veronica, but he was this ready to believe Koontz killed Lilly back then so I'm not surprised Mac and everyone else believes it. *sighs* I don't know if I'm gonna finish this, especially since Veronica is dead. And even killed that brutally. Even though that is where she was headed with how she ran head first into danger. Awesome fic though. Really.

[em2mb]

Totally. And I get that it's painful - I don't always even like reading back through what I've written. But I can't get this story out of my head, so I just push through. I hope you'll continue, but if you don't, thanks for checking it out!

[a_h_c]

Whoa. Okay, I see what the warnings were about. earth2mars told me you would have something coming out and she wasn't kidding. What to say... I really do want to stick with this fic through all the parts because I think your basic premise -- that Veronica's inability to open up to others and assess her own risks could lead to her demise and that Logan could be seen as responsible for it -- is a sound one. Not one I necessarily like, but given where the show left off, completely reasonable. It is painful to see the repurcussions of her death on the other characters, though -- I think you have done the characterizations well so far. And I kind of like the idea of Sacks taking on a more predominate roll.

I am interested to see where you take this and what the final outcome will be. Thanks for not giving up on the show -- I'm not ready to give up my VM fanfic yet!

[em2mb]

Wait, the two of you confer over little ol' me? I'm flattered. :) I do hope you'll stick with it; I didn't figure this would be a popular one, but I just had to tell this story. Because (exactly what you said), I feel like it needed to be done given how the show ended. I'm doing my damnedest to get the characters right, especially ones RT got wrong/ignored all of season three. And I totally love writing Sacks!

And no way am I done with fic. I've still got, like 80+ prompts left. And I will finish them!

[a_h_c]

I had done a post about the dearth of VM fanfic sending me into mourning (it was complicated by the veronicamarsfic unintentional hiatus) and Bri told me you had somethng in the works.

80 prompts, huh? Cool. I'm gonna hold you to that!

[danniisupernova]

Oh!! Very interesting. Not large on LoVe or Logan but this is damn engaging. I especially love your characterization of Sacks. It's not often that he gets some attention.

[em2mb]

There's a dashing and capable man beneath the 'stash, I'm sure. At any rate, glad I caught your attention! Thanks for reading!