Ha! I love it. I like fics in which Relena is not a) crazy, b) a total bitch, or c) a stalker. I really didn't have a problem with Relena in the series - she's smart, brave, and friendly. She only becomes an issue for me if she is competition for Duo *evil grin*.
I liked the banter between Duo and Relena - it seemed like real best buddies talk instead of stilted or overly clever chit chat. Also, the meeting with Heero and the description... mmm. Lucky Duo. The pacing is also very nice as well as the scene. Nicely done, as always, elsie.
Hehe, I love this Relena. She's cocky, and that's a nice change.
I really like the way you set up their meeting. That was an awesome way of using the prompt, too. I think I was salivating along with Duo when Heero sucked the shuttlecock. ^_^
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I liked the banter between Duo and Relena - it seemed like real best buddies talk instead of stilted or overly clever chit chat. Also, the meeting with Heero and the description... mmm. Lucky Duo. The pacing is also very nice as well as the scene. Nicely done, as always, elsie.
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"Relena, no straight man sucks shuttlecock like that."
That line was priceless.
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Duo's eyes were back on Heero again. "Sports Authority. I need to pick up a racquet and a couple of shuttle. Cocks."
What a GREAT metaphor. XD
Adorable, as always. You write such awesome characters. ^___^ *Glomp* Looking forward to more!
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I really like the way you set up their meeting. That was an awesome way of using the prompt, too. I think I was salivating along with Duo when Heero sucked the shuttlecock. ^_^
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"Relena, no straight man sucks shuttlecock like that."
One of the best Duo lines, ever.
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