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elsewhere87

Love Woven Through Two Territories

Feb 02, 2013 11:09

( Four: Sapid Heat of Life Kisses Goodbye Charade {Part Two} )

character: agravaine, character: merlin/emrys, ✒writing: love woven..., character: ygraine, mood: adventure, mood: friendship, ✍status: in progress, mood: family, character: arthur, length: multi chapters, mood: romance, type: alternative universe, character: guinevere

Comments 19

minah_25 February 2 2013, 20:42:47 UTC

Great update. I hope whatever is coming Arwen will fight it together. Update soon.

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:43:41 UTC

Oh glad you enjoyed. And yes...they'll be bonding more. I'm going to try to update soon.

Thanks. <3

ella_rose88 February 2 2013, 22:57:23 UTC

Yay finally a update! Glad that Arthur ended it with Elaine. She appears more cunning and I'm feeling that she is up to no good.

I loved seeing Gwen/Merlin working together.

As with Arwen, I just want them to have sex already.

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:45:16 UTC

Yeah, Elaine is interesting.

The Gwen/Merlin scene was such fun to write. They are so great as friends.

lol...Arwen sex...guess I'll add that to the list of what is wanted for this story...ha ha!

I'm a joker...thanks! <3

sv_lilah February 3 2013, 05:35:37 UTC

I really love that Arthur is coming around. I love that you're writing him in way that we get to see him grow from arrogant prince to king of legend and that its all because of Gwen. Also, the Gwen and Merlin friendship was one of my favorite things about the show, so I'm glad it's here too. But I have to ask.... When is she getting kidnapped lol! Cause I wanna see desparate Arthur already. Punk deserves to be going out of is mind haha! I'm so mean. Especially to Arthur.

elsewhere87 February 3 2013, 05:43:22 UTC

Okay, M wants them to get it on and you want her to get kidnapped!

You guys crack me up...hee...um...it's coming...how soon?

(considering this chapter was over 10,000 words and I swear it wasn't planned that way...)

They'll be getting it on sooner, lol!

Thanks!

sv_lilah February 3 2013, 14:31:27 UTC

I actually want both things to happen!! Either way I want Arthur to finally admit that he's in love with her or falling for her out loud... ;) Also, I was thinking about this story last night before bed and it hit me... When Gwen is kidnapped are people going to think her a traitor? Is that why Arthur has to choose between love or his duty? Does something happen where Agravaine can accuse her of being a traitor publicly? I think I know what big event could happen to cause this.... O.o

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:46:52 UTC

You have such great questions and ideas, but uh...time will tell. :)

Need to work on this fic this week and so on so I can actually update, lol.

thanks <3

zorbaparry February 3 2013, 07:32:56 UTC

I am so glad you decided to continue this story, i love it! I love all the different story lines, but especially the way you write Arthur and Guinevere. I am ,literally on the edge of my seat whenever they are in the same room, their chemistry is palpable. I especially love the last part and what he says out loud to her, it was just beautiful. She did not hear it because she was asleep, right? I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter, please keep writing! Cheers! :) Megan

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:49:16 UTC

I'm glad all the storylines are working for you, and that AG especially, because my heart is so full when I get to write just them in this, especially. All parts are great to write, but something about them...just aw.

She did not hear him. She was asleep definitely. I'm glad you liked that last part. I adored writing it.

Thanks Megan...hope to update soon. Will be posting my fic challenge fics in the meantime this week.

Thanks again. <3

2sam11 February 3 2013, 07:51:13 UTC

Arthur is finally more grown up. I have not read the original - so I am still in the dark about her kidnapping - but I am sure that I will be on the edge of my seat the whole time long. Anyway, I really like the Arthur/Guinevere relationship here, but this chapter I really wanted them to just do it LOL

Guinevere is awesome as ever.
Agravaine is awful as ever.
I am worried about Arthur’s mother though.

So happy that you are working on this again /even though I loved Chambers/ ♥

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:52:35 UTC

Yeah, the kidnapping had yet to happen in the original too. It's a little more down the line. Something else will happen first.

lol...another one that wants them to do it. And noted. ha ha.

Yay for Gwen...oh poor Agravaine (lol)...yeah...on the last.

Oh I'm glad you enjoyed Chambers. This week I'm going to get up those challenge fics we wrote some weeks ago, lol. So many were greatly prompted by you.

But um yeah, I hope to get Territories worked on this week so I can post it sometime soon.

Thanks! <3