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elsewhere87

Love Woven Through Two Territories

Feb 02, 2013 11:09

( Four: Sapid Heat of Life Kisses Goodbye Charade {Part Two} )

character: agravaine, character: merlin/emrys, ✒writing: love woven..., character: ygraine, mood: adventure, mood: friendship, ✍status: in progress, mood: family, character: arthur, length: multi chapters, mood: romance, type: alternative universe, character: guinevere

Comments 19

fabyenn February 3 2013, 11:19:13 UTC

I'm so glad you updated this one! It was one of my favorite WIP and I can't wait for Arthur and Gwen to unleash that unbridled passion. I think a kidnapping is a way to go to get this marriage consummated LOL.

Keep it comin'!

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 06:55:01 UTC

Another for the passion, hah hah...you guys could start a 'get it on' club for A/G. Uh...I may disappoint though because I don't know how soon it's coming, lol.

Noted...kidnapping = consummation!

I want to work on this fic this week so I can hopefully update soon. Thanks! <3

hope27 February 5 2013, 23:42:04 UTC

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY!

Everytime I see an update, I'm always so excited to read it no matter how busy I am, I always try to find the time. And you never disappoint with the amazing characterization and story you are telling. I love that we got to hear Arthur's thoughts and see him facing the changes he's feeling. I love that at the end he admitted, at least to himself, that he is changing not only because of his mother and the duty he feels towards his father but also because he's beginning to really FEEL something for Guinevere. He cares about what she thinks and feels and I think he even enjoys the fact that she stands up to him.

Agraivaine is a little stink...period.

Oh and Merlin's backstory in this is intriguing. I really like that he learned from his father and that cave sounds so interesting. I love that I could visualize it in my head just from your descriptions.

Keep up the amazing work, hon!

elsewhere87 March 18 2013, 07:01:54 UTC

Stunning feedback, wow.

You're too kind. I barely know what to say, but I appreciate all your lovely words. I'm glad you're seeing the growth in Arthur. It's very important along with his interactions with Gwen etc.

Yeah, it's very hard to write Arthur not caring for Gwen honestly. It's almost instinctive for him to think of her and so to get him past denying what he feels is nice.

Agravaine, lol...he's not in any favorite spots with any readers. That's for sure. Agravaine's interesting to me though.

Yay, I'm glad you liked the part with Merlin's backstory. Oh...you could visualize it? Awesome.

Thanks so much. Your feedback is just lovely. I'm going to get up our challenge fics I did for the team this week...you gave us some wonderful prompts {Oh and by the way I'm so glad you're the one who did my Hook prompt...I was hoping it would be you...I will read/respond soon) for the challenge. But then also I want to start working on the new one for this story so I can update sometime soon.

Thanks again! <3

sv_lilah May 6 2013, 05:29:53 UTC

Yes I read it again. I'm desperate for an update Mara!! ;)

elsewhere87 July 8 2013, 05:13:43 UTC

On summer vacation so wanted to let you know I'm working on this now, the new part, if you're still interested.

Having lots of AG feels so returning to writing them is just lovely. :)

Thanks and hugs! <3

sv_lilah July 8 2013, 12:13:49 UTC

YES! Of course I'm still interested. I actually checked this page last night to see if you've updated lol!