Love Woven Through Two Territories

[elsewhere87]

Comments

[minah_25]

This was a great update. I am glad that Gwen didnt let Arthur off for his affair and confronted him. It shows she is not some weakling. It would be great if she could pair up with Arthur to take down his uncle, but his head is so far up his own butt I dont see that happen soon. But Merlin would be awesome. Will we get to see Gwen confront Elaine that would be great since she has been given Gwen hints she is sleeping with her husband. Please update soon.

[elsewhere87]

Wonderful. I definitely want to show Gwen's strength. Merlin and Gwen will be getting closer. :)

Elaine and Gwen will probably have a confrontation or two at some time.

Thank you!

[fabyenn]

Arthur is an ass, but he still protects his wife from creepy uncle Agravaine so there is hope for him yet, lol. Still sucks for Gwen that she's forced into being celibate when he isn't! And finally, I asked before but I'm asking again, when are they getting busy LOL? More please!

[elsewhere87]

Right, he can be a jerk, but be protective too, lol.

Hmmm...getting busy, well you probably know me, slow and steady wins the race. It's coming...somewhere down the road. There might be some drama first though.

Thanks!

[ella_rose88]

Oh I love the bits you added Mara! Gwen telling Arthur off was right on. It's clear that Arthur cares about being a good Prince and Camelot and hopefully he will listen to Gwen as she is the only brave one who is honest with him

Can't wait for the next update!

[elsewhere87]

Glad the added bits contribute well to the story. I needed Gwen to confront Arthur on all he's up to. Yes. I'm glad that's clear and that she is showing to be the one who lets him know the truth.

Thanks!

[2sam11]

Love it! Gwen finally confronted Arthur! It was really needed! Arthur is such an ass. But i still love him to pieces :) -"You act like you are so cold and so afraid of just living."- This is such a perfect description for Arthur in this. Urgh; i never liked Agravaine, this Fanfiction is no exeption! Can`t wait for more Igraine as well :) Since it`s really rare for her to be in Arwen Fics. I hope that Arthur will learn from his mistakes! And that Guinevere will tell Arthur about the vial. I`m surprised, what does Elena took from Arthur`s pocket? I`m still very interested in Arthur`s backstory. Urgh; i can`t wait for more! Great chapter.

[elsewhere87]

Arthur is acting like that right, but glad you still love him, lol.

Hmmm...Agravaine....

I love writing Ygraine and putting her in a story with her son.

Hmmm...you noticed the Elena part...

Ah, yay, I want to go into some of Arthur's backstory in future chapters.

Thank you!

[chyti]

I hope that slimy ass uncle isn't denying or poisioning Ygraine and that Elena has to be working along with him, two snakes in the grass.

Yeah for Gwen letting Arthur know how she feels instead of holding it in, sleep in that big cold bed by yourself and Gwen needs to let Arthur aware that she too is female and has certain urges that the men of Camelot would appreciate. It seems that he is quite jealous and I am sure if he thought that someone else was taking care of his husbandly duties he would cut them at the knees.

Please keep it coming

[elsewhere87]

Agravaine and Elaine are being very sneaky right now.

Yes, Gwen needed to confront Arthur. Hmmm...jealousy might factor in because I agree with your point on Arthur entirely.

Thank you!