Love Woven Through Two Territories

[elsewhere87]

Comments

[sv_lilah]

I want to see Gwen punch him and kiss at the same time. I love how he defends her. It just comes so naturally to him. And something tells me Agravaine is the one that will be responsible for her kidnapping... O.o

[elsewhere87]

lol, those kinds of mixed emotions mean I'm doing something right, make me happpy. Yay, the defense is coming through nicely.

Hmmm...

lol...thank you!

[hope27]

Ah, I'm so late to comment on this and I apologize. I had a death in the family this week, and real life just got busy.

Anyway, I LOVED all the parts you added. The little scenes peppered here and there really help to illuminate Arthur and Gwen's feelings. I still want to slap Arthur at this point but he's showing improvement and he earned points by helping Gwen out during her brief run-in with Uncle Aggy...creep.

Once again I love the way you are telling this story and I look forward to the next installment!!!

[elsewhere87]

I am so sorry for your loss. I hope you and your family are healing from it.

Please don't ever apologize. Your feedback is wonderful and always worth the wait.

So glad the added parts are working well. Showing their feelings more vividly is so important to me.

Arthur is being quite annoying in some ways right now, definitely. That run in scene was important to me to write so glad it worked.

Thank you so much!

[sv_lilah]

So I have no idea how many times I have read these chapters... But that's okay because every time I read it I love it even more. I know you said you'd be working on this in the coming weeks. Just know I am patiently or impatiently waiting for an update. :-D