"Bratja" Doujinshi

Nov 05, 2006 06:34

Wooo, I'm back with a new, homemade doujin! *dances* Be proud of me! (...please? ;_;)

Title: Bratja
Rating: PG-10
Genre: General/Angst
Pairings: None, really. (Traces of Royai, Elricest, maybe even RoyxEd if you squint hard enough.)
Warnings: Blood. Sketchy-ness. Really big font. Twisted, time-jumping plotline. Lyrics. (Yes, this is-- perhaps-- ( Read more... )

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zed_azrael November 5 2006, 07:35:48 UTC
T0T I think I must have cried a bit from reading that. The concept, though rather melancholy, was very fitting for the lyrics, and considering the luck we've seen from the Elric brothers, it seems like something not too farfetched from what Arakawa-sensei might do. (OH GOD, NOOOOOO!!!!!)

Your extraordinary command of language really was well showcased in this, even if it was a doujin. I read your comments/reflection on this piece, and I think you're right. If this had been made into a a story, it would have lost some of its character.

The art well accentuated the monologue and lyrics and dialogue, and was perfect for getting your point across.

Thanks for sharing this with us. It really was an artistic piece -- and not because it was a doujin.

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zed_azrael November 5 2006, 07:36:40 UTC
Wow. First comment. Should I be happy? I can never quite understand why people get all excited over it... *shrugs* Oh well.

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crescent_moony November 5 2006, 21:29:29 UTC
Yeaaaah... I don't really understand the allure of "first comment," either. ^_^;

(I appreciate that you read it at ALL, never mind being the first or second or last. ^_~)

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crescent_moony November 5 2006, 21:27:58 UTC
Wow, thank you! Your comments made me smile-- that was exactly the sort of reaction I was going for. -^_^- *feels special*

Thanks for reading! *hugs*

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grass_angel November 5 2006, 11:18:57 UTC
Awww... It's so sad!

TTTT_TTTT

Though, I had to go wow for a bit, especially the whole spike thing AND the clouds.
You've gone and made me sniffly...

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crescent_moony November 5 2006, 21:30:31 UTC
-^_^- Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it... or at least made you sniffly. ^_~ *huggles*

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lisachanoando November 6 2006, 05:51:20 UTC
*damn LJ erased my comment ç_ç*

Anyway, *dies* I loved it ç_ç It moved me, it's so sad and beautiful. The thing I liked most is that, even if there are no explicit declarations, the relationship you show is so damn loving it hurts ç____ç

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crescent_moony November 11 2006, 15:42:13 UTC
Yeah, LJ does that sometimes. >.<

Anyhow, thanks so much! I'm glad it moved you-- and your comment about the relationship made my day! -^_^- *huggles*

I'm so glad you enjoyed! :3

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ankoku_tenshi November 10 2006, 05:09:50 UTC
....You're too good to us! ^^

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ankoku_tenshi November 10 2006, 05:29:44 UTC
It's devastatingly true. I think it could actually happen. AAnd you've made my doujin muse act up again. XD

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crescent_moony November 11 2006, 15:44:15 UTC
Wooo, doujin muse! X3 *does the one-person wave*

But in all seriousness-- Thanks for saying you think this could happen! I was a little worried it might seem totally out there... ^_^;

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crescent_moony November 11 2006, 15:42:49 UTC
=^_^= Awwww, thanks for saying so! *cuddle*

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denisitap June 2 2007, 18:48:35 UTC
Hi!!! Can you please, please, please re-upload this dj???

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