SPN gen ficlet - Irreversible

[eloise_bright]

Written for the 15minuteficlets prompt this week - I had a couple of ideas for this one - but I went with this.

TITLE: Irreversible
RATING: PG13 (Gen)
CHARACTERS: John, with mention of Dean and Sam
DISCLAIMER: They own my soul.
NOTES: 280 words. John POV. Spoilers for Season 1, particularly Dead Man's Blood and Devil's Trap. Cut text quote from DMB.

Comments

[rosekay]

Oh, oh...my god. I should expect it from you now, that killer last line, but they hit me so hard every single time. Oh John, you don't even know, do you? Jesus, woman, you are amazing.

(If I were an actress, which, hah, but if I were, "Don't Look Back" would be my cry on command headspace. I might be adding this to the list.)

[eloise_bright]

Thanks! I have a thing for last lines, it's a sickness, I think. John just has no idea about Dean. And re "Don't Look Back" - *blushes* Thank you so much.

[eloise_bright]

Thank you! I've done the real life flaily hands thing a few times, so pleased I could make you do it!

[embroiderama]

The heart monitor quietly records his son’s disobedience.

Waaaah! Oh, John. Oh, Dean.

(I'm sorry, I've been crying over these guys too much today. I can't be any more coherent in my feedback.)

[eloise_bright]

Thank you! I know why you've been crying over them today - my heart's in teeny pieces over here. *glares at you sternly* I'm broken by your fic. *g*

[embroiderama]

Sorry about that! Crazy glue?

[astrothsknot]

Jesus Wept, Eloise!! That story is just such a punch to guts!!

Damn!!

[eloise_bright]

Thank you, and um, sorry? I'll write something less angsty tonight.

[eloise_bright]

I have a thing for last lines. It's a sickness, I know, I'll get treatment for it. Maybe. Thank you!