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FF: Moment of Illusion

Mar 31, 2011 23:07

Title: Moment of Illusion
Author: Ellie elliestories
Rating: R for disturbing imagery
Spoilers for "Orison," Vignette, ANGST, MSR
WARNING applies, though an explanation would ruin it. Read at your own risk.
Summary: That niggling concern in the back of his mind was studiously ignored until he heard the damned song.

( He'd wanted to go home with her... )

mulder, fic, scully, xf

Comments 12

wendelah1 April 1 2011, 05:30:30 UTC

Definitely disturbing imagery. You really had me going there. Uh. Go you?

A well done, if scary as shit, vignette.

elliestories April 1 2011, 17:49:11 UTC

Thank you. The idea came easy, but the story wasn't the easiest thing to write, so while it's a departure from what I usually write, I'm glad it worked.

hoperomantic April 1 2011, 08:53:21 UTC

Very intense and well-written. Wow...

elliestories April 1 2011, 17:49:26 UTC

Thank you.

write_out April 1 2011, 12:32:10 UTC

Oh wow. Disturbing doesn't even cover it. This is really good.

elliestories April 1 2011, 17:50:11 UTC

Thank you very much.

nehmet April 1 2011, 14:58:22 UTC

Very powerful and yes, very disturbing imagery. Oh, and it was very well done!

elliestories April 1 2011, 17:51:13 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad the story worked for you; it was a big departure for me, and I was rather nervous posting it.

zinnia03 April 1 2011, 16:57:15 UTC

Oh, as if the whole thing wasn't disturbing enough, that last line:

he lay awake, feeling the dead weight of her against him.

Well done. Glad it was "only" a nightmare.

elliestories April 1 2011, 17:51:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that last line hit you like I wanted it to.